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No Painted Idol

Shakespeare revisited

3 total reviews 
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Wonderful poem, Lobber. It should be a great entry for the contest. It has been great getting to know you in class. See you on Tuesday. Stay well and healthy, my friend.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2021

Comment from Jay Squires
Excellent
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Jer, I choose your free-verse version of the sonnet over the more restrictive form any day. You did a stupendous job adding to the Bard's list of attributes by including your personal expression of your love's effect on you.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2021

Comment from Katrina White
Poor
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While a great artist like Shakespeare lives on through his works, at a certain point it can only go so far. From reading your poem you have what it takes to make your own poems free from modernizing other's poems. Take that step, scary as it is, and let your creates shine.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2021