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Halloween Terror

A horror Story

10 total reviews 
Comment from victor 66
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This is a very solid piece of storytelling and it has a very nice twist at the end. I could find no errors in grammar and the story kept me involved during it's unraveling. Best wishes in a contest.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thanks very much for your time and nice review. I appreciate it!
reply by victor 66 on 12-Oct-2021
    You are most welcome, mystery writer.
Comment from pookietoo
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Great story for this contest. So were the kidneys in the parcel.? Good luck to you in this contest. It is cold and rainy in Ogden Utah. Have a lovely weekend.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
    :):) kind of Gory details. The contest demanded it:):) Glad you liked it. Thank you for your time and review. As always it is hot in India. I live in Bombay and the sea breeze makes the heat bearable!
reply by pookietoo on 10-Oct-2021
    Were the kidneys in the parcel?
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
    Yes! What a horrible thing to do? But then the contest demanded it.:)
reply by pookietoo on 10-Oct-2021
    :)
Comment from Paul McFarland
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This story has a beginning that sets things up for a party that seems normal for Halloween. The ending has a very nice twist which is unexpected. Hence the five stars.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
    I appreciate your encouraging comments. Thank you so much for your support. Glad you liked it.
Comment from writer723
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I very much enjoyed reading your excellent story. It really drew me in and captured my attention from start to finish. I found myself rooting for the main character all the way and wishing the best for the individual. Your depiction of this situation was quite emotional and touching to me. Your descriptive skills are exceptional and you express yourself very well.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
    Thank you for taking your time to rate and comment on my story. I do appreciate it.


Comment from Mary Shifman
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This story has got nearly everything that I don't enjoy reading about. Zombies give me the creeps.Mad Doctor/types and organ harvesting from unwilling donors are equally icky. That being said, you've got a great Halloween story going here. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
    :):) Thanks so very much for your time and the fine review! I really appreciate it!
reply by Mary Shifman on 01-Oct-2021
    You are very welcome.
Comment from Hitcher
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An organ donor with out a card... a murder victim. The scary thing about your story is that your story is probably a reality for some unsuspecting unfortunate souls. We live in a dangerous world. Great story for the contest, good luck!

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
    Thanks so very much for your time and the fine review! I really appreciate it!

Comment from LisaMay
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My brother had a kidney transplant - I hope the surgeon didn't source the kidney like you did! The everyday tone of voice in your story enhances the horror aspect. You describe the scene well with its macabre background of surgical abuse of body parts. Your best friend, Bob, has objectionable habits, but he was helpful in procuring the kidney donor for you. This is a very grotesque story. Remind me never to go to a Halloween party with you.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
    Ha! Haa! what an enjoyable review. Thanks very much for your time. Much appreciated. glad you liked it!:):)
Comment from country ranch writer
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You never know what treats you can redeem until you have a fright night like this one in order to render another to get what is needed for another, fir the someone you love .

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
    I appreciate your encouraging comments. Thank you so much for your support.
reply by country ranch writer on 29-Sep-2021
    🦌🦌🦌🦌
Comment from Yardier
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Well this is pretty crazy. Nothing wrong with the grammar or flow. Still, it is as disturbing as licking feces off another's underwire. I don't think there is enough tequila in my house to erase the grotesque imagery you have so wickedly penned.

Good job, I guess, weirdo. (;-o)

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
    :):) Thanks very much for your time and interesting review. I appreciate it!
Comment from Zhen Xuan Liu
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This is a great horror story. The picture did capture my attention and is well-represented throughout the story! The descriptions are on point and spooky! Keep up the good work and best of luck on the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
    Thanks very much for your time and nice review. I appreciate it!