Whispered Breezes
Six Word poetic form10 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Melissa,
Nice use of metaphor and personification to describe an early morning breeze that seems to awaken life and hope.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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Melissa,
Nice use of metaphor and personification to describe an early morning breeze that seems to awaken life and hope.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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Thanks so very much, Joan. Hugs!
Melissa
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No problem, Melissa.
Joan
Comment from l.raven
when your day comes to an end...and
all the problems you faced in the day...
finally are over...it a good feeling to wake up to
a new starting the next day....
I love your poem...and love this beautiful picture...
very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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when your day comes to an end...and
all the problems you faced in the day...
finally are over...it a good feeling to wake up to
a new starting the next day....
I love your poem...and love this beautiful picture...
very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you!!
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your so very welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Patty Palmer
The six words you used perfectly describes mornings. The picture enhances your poem quite nicely. It makes me feel like I was watching the breeze blowing across the water and over the meadow. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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The six words you used perfectly describes mornings. The picture enhances your poem quite nicely. It makes me feel like I was watching the breeze blowing across the water and over the meadow. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thanks so much.
Comment from Wendy G
You have included a beautiful and serene image to support your gentle and peaceful words. A little alliteration, effectively included too. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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You have included a beautiful and serene image to support your gentle and peaceful words. A little alliteration, effectively included too. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you Wendy!
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very good for six words, especially with the picture. If only every morning could be welcomed that way. I guess things would be pretty boring if that were the case, but I'll take them most of the time.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Very good for six words, especially with the picture. If only every morning could be welcomed that way. I guess things would be pretty boring if that were the case, but I'll take them most of the time.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thanks for the lovely comments.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was very beautiful. You packed volumes in one line. A stunning artwork which compliments the poem.
Excellent imagery, visuals and artistic presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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This was very beautiful. You packed volumes in one line. A stunning artwork which compliments the poem.
Excellent imagery, visuals and artistic presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much.
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Gosh, I like this. It is a great entry for the contest and I wish you the best of luck! Your picture is gorgeous. It is so wonderful when there is a fairly warm morning with breezes that soothe. Very well-written presentation!!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Gosh, I like this. It is a great entry for the contest and I wish you the best of luck! Your picture is gorgeous. It is so wonderful when there is a fairly warm morning with breezes that soothe. Very well-written presentation!!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much Sherry!
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Thank you very much Sherry!
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Thank you very much Sherry!
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Thank you very much Sherry!
Comment from RodG
This artwork/poem combo captures the MOOD of an early morning. We assume those "soft, whispered breezes" are floating across a silent lake as the sun is rising. Rod
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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This artwork/poem combo captures the MOOD of an early morning. We assume those "soft, whispered breezes" are floating across a silent lake as the sun is rising. Rod
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you Rod... with only six words, I hope to lead the reader into retrospection so they can complete the scene in their minds.... bravo on doing just that!!
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You made it easy.
Comment from Mary Shifman
I love this little six word poem. It is dreamy and magical, very much like the accompanying picture. I can't seem to write a short poem like this that doesn't sound dull. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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I love this little six word poem. It is dreamy and magical, very much like the accompanying picture. I can't seem to write a short poem like this that doesn't sound dull. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thanks so much, Mary!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a serene poem filled with great imagery, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading your entry. Your 6 words, as required, create a great mood. The image is beautiful.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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What a serene poem filled with great imagery, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading your entry. Your 6 words, as required, create a great mood. The image is beautiful.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Hello Jan! Thanks so much, my friend.
