Beware of the Cat
This cat isn't so harmless.8 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and well written six word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and adorable imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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This is a very cute and well written six word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and adorable imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from dragonpoet
Raul,
Who would think of be afraid of such ab cute kitten. But tigers are wild and dangerous.
This is a short concise poem to remind us that somethings shouldn't be taken for granted and sometimes cute doesn't mean safe.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Raul,
Who would think of be afraid of such ab cute kitten. But tigers are wild and dangerous.
This is a short concise poem to remind us that somethings shouldn't be taken for granted and sometimes cute doesn't mean safe.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you!
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No problem.
Joan
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a cute poem and the kitty is adorable. However, he does look like he has sharp teeth and those little claws can pack quite a wallop and leave nasty scratches. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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This is a cute poem and the kitty is adorable. However, he does look like he has sharp teeth and those little claws can pack quite a wallop and leave nasty scratches. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles,
unknown writer about the Six Word Poetry Contest
Even if that cute kitten looks so sweet can be vicious. I wish you the best in the contest
Gert
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Smiles,
unknown writer about the Six Word Poetry Contest
Even if that cute kitten looks so sweet can be vicious. I wish you the best in the contest
Gert
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you!
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You are most welcome unknown writer.
Gert
Comment from Mary Shifman
Nice play on words. I understand the sentiment. My cat will often pounce on my feet beneath the covers and do a play capture with kicking and biting. Fortunately, my feet are usually well padded.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Nice play on words. I understand the sentiment. My cat will often pounce on my feet beneath the covers and do a play capture with kicking and biting. Fortunately, my feet are usually well padded.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Pray for yourself if he is after you, lol What a cute little mite!! You have presented us with a delightful entry for this contest and I wish you the best of luck!! This is a case of "a picture is worth a thousand (or 6) words.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Pray for yourself if he is after you, lol What a cute little mite!! You have presented us with a delightful entry for this contest and I wish you the best of luck!! This is a case of "a picture is worth a thousand (or 6) words.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you!
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You are welcome a lot!!
Comment from Zhen Xuan Liu
I love the simplicity of this, but it should be a bit longer. The shortest format of poetry is haiku, a 5-7-5 syllable poem. I think there could be more description to how the cat hunts down its preys or how menacing it looks.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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I love the simplicity of this, but it should be a bit longer. The shortest format of poetry is haiku, a 5-7-5 syllable poem. I think there could be more description to how the cat hunts down its preys or how menacing it looks.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you! It is a six word poetry
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Oh, so sorry!
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It's okay, just make sure of the contest this time, my friend. Happy writing!
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Happy writing!
Comment from Paul McFarland
I usually don't get involved with poems that short, but you have done a great job with the prompt. Every once in awhile I will write a poem that must be read instead of being heard.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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I usually don't get involved with poems that short, but you have done a great job with the prompt. Every once in awhile I will write a poem that must be read instead of being heard.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you!
