Mother Nature At Her Best
autumn ( contest entry )48 total reviews
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
I like haiku to be complete and coherent thought in a well created form. This is one of those pieces. The accompanying picture i lovely as well and he sparkling light suggests the fashion runway. A nice whole.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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I like haiku to be complete and coherent thought in a well created form. This is one of those pieces. The accompanying picture i lovely as well and he sparkling light suggests the fashion runway. A nice whole.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi Nancy, Thank You so much...I am so glad you like it...God Bless...love
Comment from Anne Johnston
"dressed for the season
Mother Nature provides her
autumn fashion show"
Great description of autumn - a fashion show of colour. I like the picture you have chosen.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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"dressed for the season
Mother Nature provides her
autumn fashion show"
Great description of autumn - a fashion show of colour. I like the picture you have chosen.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi Anna, Thank You for a wonderful review...I'm so glad you like it...love
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You are welcome
Comment from Paul McFarland
I usually pass on the Haiku, but this one is a notch above most of the others I have seen. Interesting lack of punctuation and capitalization except for "Mother Nature".
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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I usually pass on the Haiku, but this one is a notch above most of the others I have seen. Interesting lack of punctuation and capitalization except for "Mother Nature".
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi Paul, that's her name sweet guy...and I am honored by your review...Thank You...love
Comment from Ben Colder
Soon our mountains will be a harvest golden with an evergreen background. Your poem is nice and a great contest entry. Best of luck . Hope you win.Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Soon our mountains will be a harvest golden with an evergreen background. Your poem is nice and a great contest entry. Best of luck . Hope you win.Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi Ben, it really is an amazing sight to see...Thank You for a wonderful review...and your best of luck...and you are so very welcome...love
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
When you miss outdoors, being with mother nature enjoying a walk with the trees, enjoying the beautiful smell of fresh air, looking at the mountains and listening to the birds singing, you miss life. I loved your beautifully worded short poem. Good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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When you miss outdoors, being with mother nature enjoying a walk with the trees, enjoying the beautiful smell of fresh air, looking at the mountains and listening to the birds singing, you miss life. I loved your beautifully worded short poem. Good luck!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi Seshadri, Thank you for a wonderful review...and your words are so very true...Mother Nature is a free given gift to us through God...he wants us to enjoy it...God Bless...and Thank You for the luck...Love
Comment from nomi338
And man oh man, what a show she puts on. Piles of multicolored leaves collect upon the ground, soon to be joined by yet more colorful late comers. The heat is making a reluctant departure, as relieved, sunburned residents bid a fond farewell, slowly anticipating a cooling Autumn, just ahead of a bone chilling Winter.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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And man oh man, what a show she puts on. Piles of multicolored leaves collect upon the ground, soon to be joined by yet more colorful late comers. The heat is making a reluctant departure, as relieved, sunburned residents bid a fond farewell, slowly anticipating a cooling Autumn, just ahead of a bone chilling Winter.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi Nolan, LOL...sunburned residents bid a fond farewell...tooo funny you...Thank You for a truly wonderful review you...my tree in the front is staring to turn colors...beautiful you...God Bless...love
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with excellent imagery and personification.
Just the right timing as autumn is about on put on her show.
The video is a bit distracting, but that's personal choice.
Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with excellent imagery and personification.
Just the right timing as autumn is about on put on her show.
The video is a bit distracting, but that's personal choice.
Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi Robert, LOL...your review made me kick my milk on the floor sweet guy...spilled everywhere...LOL...distracting...have you ever driven down the street on a beautiful autumn day???...now that's distracting...trees blowing in the wind...and rusty red leaves falling like rain...sigh...Thank You for a wonderful review you...love
Comment from Sherry Asbury
What a jazzy three lines and artwork for my favorite season! I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Your lines are perfect for the contest and your artwork is so cool!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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What a jazzy three lines and artwork for my favorite season! I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Your lines are perfect for the contest and your artwork is so cool!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi Sherry, Thank You so much for wonderful review you...
it truly is a beautiful time of the years...I love watch the rusty red leaves falling like rain...it's amazing...and I understand why it is your favorite season of the year...love
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Thank you, sweet One!!
Comment from Cogitator
This is fashion madness, truly cute in the conveyance of the right attitude.
The 17 syllables really demand focus and attention.
Dressed for the season,
Mother Nature is the reason
For Autumn fashion
Best picture, for sure
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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This is fashion madness, truly cute in the conveyance of the right attitude.
The 17 syllables really demand focus and attention.
Dressed for the season,
Mother Nature is the reason
For Autumn fashion
Best picture, for sure
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi John, I love the way you wrote it...
if I were going to change it...
dressed for the season
Mother Nature is the reason
autumn fashion show
but I posted it for the contest...written in my words...
and I like it that way as well...
Thank You so much for your words...and a wonderful review...
God Bless...love
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery with
the theme of 'fall fashion."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery with
the theme of 'fall fashion."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi Pam, Thank You so much for a wonderful review you...
I am so glad you like it...and Thank You for the Good Luck...
love
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You are very welcome.
