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Saint Mary

This was one of my more memorable patients as a Chaplain.

34 total reviews 
Comment from Carol Clark2
Excellent
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This is a great story, well written. I'm amazed at your persistence with Mary in asking her to give her life to Jesus. I could sense the urgency of knowing she was near the end of her life on earth. Touching story. Thanks for sharing. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
    Thanks Carol for your reading and reviewing. Your kind words remind me of how close "Mary" came to missing heaven and how much of a difference we make when we mind God.
reply by Carol Clark2 on 13-Feb-2023
    God's promptings are often critical, and His timing is perfect. It's good you obeyed. Have a blessed week.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
    Likewise.
Comment from Melissa Place
Exceptional
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As a Christian myself, this story really resonates with me. I think it is every Christian's desire to lead someone to a transforming life in Christ. I am happy for both you and St. Mary. I enjoyed the story immensely and wish you the very best in your writing endeavors. Bravo! Melissa.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
    Thank you for going back into the archives and reading what was a very moving, God story for me. I have been on FanStory since 2014 and these events happened several years before that. I never wrote about it in FanStory, thinking that it might offend some people. But the affirmation I have received encourages my heart. I have to say WOW to the six stars, thanks. Thank you very much. God bless you
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
    Thank you for going back into the archives and reading what was a very moving, God story for me. I have been on FanStory since 2014 and these events happened several years before that. I never wrote about it in FanStory, thinking that it might offend some people. But the affirmation I have received encourages my heart. I have to say WOW to the six stars, thanks. Thank you very much. God bless you
Comment from Ric Myworld
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I can honestly say that there has never been a bigger thrill in life than leading a lost soul to accept Jesus Christ as their Lord and savior. I'm sure as chaplain you have seen about everything, but I'm sure the rewards are worth the struggles. Thanks for sharing your fine story and best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read a long narrative for 2 cents. Thanks for the words of life and the understanding that a life saved for eternity is a BIG deal. Embrace the love from above.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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I am sorry I do not have six stars for this story. Truly you must feel so joyful when you succeed in bringing someone like Mary back to God. This is but one of your fold. I am sure from your perseverance displayed here that this has happened many times. So well written and well done.
Bless you!

Ralf

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
    Thank you so very much for your honoring me by taking the time to read and review this very true story of "Mary." If the truth be known, this is one of several stories I have, but it was unique in the persistence I felt I was to maintain while sharing with "Mary" that day.Thank you so much for your words of affirmation and those five beautiful stars that emotionally, I am going to count as six lol. Thanks again. #EmbraceTheLoveFromAbove
Comment from Cogitator
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Keep up the posts and do it often. The gift is there and will develop. Oth than some spacing, it looks very good. I look for ward to more. Thanks for the post...John

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
    Hey John, thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my true story of, "Mary." I appreciate the five stars plus the words of encouragement. Feel free to point out areas of concern for possible corrections. I really do want to hone this craft of writing and make an impact on my world. If you help me, Along with all the other FanStory Friends. I believe it can happen.
Comment from bob cullen
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Persistence truly can be rewarding and I feel certain it triumphed in this instance. The Chaplain's faith too is inspirational. It really is a great story. I do have one question. Is the story in any way based on a factual event. It reads as credible.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
    Thank you so very much Bob for your taking the time to read and review my absolutely 100%, to the best of my recollection, true story of "Mary." Thank you also for the five wonderful stars that indicate and affirmation for this piece. Good to hear from you again. I come and go with this site, hopefully I?m back for a while. Lol #EmbraceTheLoveFromAbove
Comment from blondie560
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This is a very moving story of the struggle people can have with faith when they question if God is there when terrible things happen. I hope Mary was able to make amends with her daughters before her death. I'm sure as a chaplain you have seen many horrors that has some people questioning God. Thank you for sharing yours and Mary's stories.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my true story of, "Saint Mary." I appreciate the five wonderful stars you gave me as well. As far as her reconnection with her daughters, it has been a number of years ago when this took place, but I?m quite sure there was a real genuine reconnection. God bless you. #EmbraceTheLoveFromAbove
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Gripping story, stunning narration. I don't blame Mary for hating God, even on general principle of evil in the world--sounds like she accepted Jesus out of fear of hell, yet ended up finding peace. This may be a winner.


Liz [stated,=>pref. "said" (OMIT COMMA)] mom was just becoming open

Are your yesterday's=>YESTERDAYS (plural) gone?"

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this true story. I appreciate so much for five excellent stars UK. I went back and believe I corrected the areas of concern. God bless you.
Comment from Tpa
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The story was interesting. I could her reason for not trusting God or anyone else for that matter. At least towards the end of her life, the chaplain helped her to release her pain she held for so many years. Good Luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I really appreciate the five beautiful stars you gave.
Comment from Wendy G
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

How wonderful. Not only that she came to Jesus in the last week of her life, but that you were so patient, so wise and understanding and so caring towards her, sensitive to the leading of the Holy Spirit. This must have given you so much joy , as well as her family. What a blessing.
Wendy

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thank you for both reading and reviewing "Saint Mary." I appreciate your kind words of affirmation. I was hesitant to put this out there on FanStory but I have been pleasantly surprised with the response.
    Thanks for the 6 Exceptional stars.