Guess What?
Don't give up just because you hear, No Chance.54 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
This was a nice poem. It could use an edit. Gramps's I would change to Gramps' because "is" was not a connector. And punctuation in line two because of the quote.
Congratualtions on the new baby. God bless :)
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
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This was a nice poem. It could use an edit. Gramps's I would change to Gramps' because "is" was not a connector. And punctuation in line two because of the quote.
Congratualtions on the new baby. God bless :)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
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It has taken me a long time to thank you, SORRY. I did make the corrections. Embrace the Love from above!
Comment from robyn corum
Nad,
I can only imagine what THAT felt like. To be a fly on the wall THAT day would have been fun, I bet. Happy smiles and tears all 'round. Wow. You should see MY face. hahahaha Those smiles are contagious, I guess. Very cool!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Nad,
I can only imagine what THAT felt like. To be a fly on the wall THAT day would have been fun, I bet. Happy smiles and tears all 'round. Wow. You should see MY face. hahahaha Those smiles are contagious, I guess. Very cool!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Robyn, for reading and reviewing. We don't know if we are expecting a boy or girl, but the Doc says St. Patrick's day is the target date. We are thrilled for our daughter and her husband.
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
I was married and after six years my wife did not conceive. We tried all ways and means to get her to conceive. God had his own plan. Through a miracle, which I plan to write one day, she was conceived. We have now three grown-up children, two girls, and one boy. With God anything is possible. Thanks for sharing, Kit.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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I was married and after six years my wife did not conceive. We tried all ways and means to get her to conceive. God had his own plan. Through a miracle, which I plan to write one day, she was conceived. We have now three grown-up children, two girls, and one boy. With God anything is possible. Thanks for sharing, Kit.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Kit, I was gone for a day to my daughter's and she is progressing perfectly. I am so happy about your family story, like ours. Thank You so much for the marvelous review and the 6 Exceptional Stars.
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The story deserves all the stars that can be given, Kit.
Comment from lyenochka
Certainly God has the ultimate say on birth and life in general. It reminds me of Sarah, Rebekah, and Hannah in the Bible. Good message in your three line poem. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2021
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Certainly God has the ultimate say on birth and life in general. It reminds me of Sarah, Rebekah, and Hannah in the Bible. Good message in your three line poem. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2021
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Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing my poem, ?Guess What??
Our Baby is having a Baby!
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Last line says all that needs to be said about who the final authority is, Really enjoyed this poem. Though something may not seem possible, mere humans sometimes do not get the biggest picture. They do not alwsys make the decisions. Much could be learned from that last line.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Last line says all that needs to be said about who the final authority is, Really enjoyed this poem. Though something may not seem possible, mere humans sometimes do not get the biggest picture. They do not alwsys make the decisions. Much could be learned from that last line.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Thank You so very much for reading and reviewing "Guess What?" I appreciate your kind, affirming words and those 6 Exceptional stars. I think you're right, we do often miss the big picture. Our family feels blessed beyond measure. Embrace the Love from Above.
Comment from MissMerri
This touched my heart deeply. I know what it feels like to have the doctors tell you there is no way and can easily imagine the joy of knowing a baby was due. I am delighted for your daughter. Your poem spells it out clearly and concisely. Best of luck in this contest.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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This touched my heart deeply. I know what it feels like to have the doctors tell you there is no way and can easily imagine the joy of knowing a baby was due. I am delighted for your daughter. Your poem spells it out clearly and concisely. Best of luck in this contest.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Thank You so very much for reading and reviewing "Guess What?" I appreciate your kind, affirmation, and your shared delight. Thanks also for those 5 Excellent stars. Our family feels blessed beyond measure. Embrace the Love from Above.
Comment from SHABAMO
I am so happy for you and your family, and that the doctor was wrong in this case.
I hope being retired as you get to be part of your granddaughters life is a wonderful experience for your entire family.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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I am so happy for you and your family, and that the doctor was wrong in this case.
I hope being retired as you get to be part of your granddaughters life is a wonderful experience for your entire family.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my poem "Guess What?" We do feel truly blessed as a family, knowing that the Dr. was wrong in God was right. Prayers are not always answered in our time or in our way but God is good all the time. And this time, we're thrilled with both.
Comment from jenintorre
A very joyful poem. I know the feeling of not being able to conceive. Congratulations. Such a wonderful gift for your family. Delightful artwork. Best of luck in the competition. Jen.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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A very joyful poem. I know the feeling of not being able to conceive. Congratulations. Such a wonderful gift for your family. Delightful artwork. Best of luck in the competition. Jen.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Thank You so very much for reading and reviewing "Guess What?" I appreciate your kind, affirming words and those 5 Excellent stars. Thanks for sharing a bit of your personal story with vulnerability and transparency. Our family feels blessed beyond measure. Embrace the Love from Above.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your nineteen syllables in this lovely, uplifting, joyous piece. Doctors aren't always right--and then, of course, there are miracles! :-)
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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You have made excellent use of your nineteen syllables in this lovely, uplifting, joyous piece. Doctors aren't always right--and then, of course, there are miracles! :-)
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Thank You so very much for reading and reviewing "Guess What?" I appreciate your kind, affirming words and those 5 Excellent stars. Our family feels blessed beyond measure. Embrace the Love from Above.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congratulations. Charming poem on a happy--and miraculous--event pending. Clever twist at the end. Perfect title for the theme. Write a follow up in March.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Congratulations. Charming poem on a happy--and miraculous--event pending. Clever twist at the end. Perfect title for the theme. Write a follow up in March.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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That sounds like a plan Elizabeth. LOL Thank You so very much for reading and reviewing "Guess What?" I appreciate your kind, affirming words and those 5 Excellent stars. Our family feels blessed beyond measure. Embrace the Love from Above.
