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Looking for Demons

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An Investigator needs to find a demon

3 total reviews 
Comment from Adri7enne
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

People fall in love for the weirdest reasons. Women like strength and confidence in a man and being worshiped for centuries must do wonders for a god's ego. Lol! And beauty is in the eye of the beholder as poets have been telling us for eons. Guess Ashur and Ms. Anderton must still be spending eternity making sweet art together. Well done, Bob. I really enjoyed this exciting tale of gods and mortals. So romantic!

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
    THanks. Glad you liked it.
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
Excellent
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I like a book on a supernatural themes that has some interesting twists and turns. The term "cut glass English accent" is a treat. I could hear it in my head. Was a good read.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
    Thank you. I'm glad you liked it
reply by NANCY V. FORREST on 14-Aug-2021
    :-)
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Excellent
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Is this how he solved the problem:
Women were always suckers for a god-like body, even when it was one like Ashur's

Coming from Portugal, you write very well in English. It will be helpful if you could introduce the characters in the Author's note and give Synopsis of the book.

I like the following expression.
a cut-glass English accent.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
    Thank you. I have spoken English for most of my 64 years. It is Portuguese I have problems with.