No, Don't Tickle Me
I just had to do it!19 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Nad
This was so cute I just had to review it. I love both the picture and the poem. I think we have all been there. First is the invitation, then comes the inspiration and then you close with the irrigation. I loved it. Embrace the Love from Above.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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This was so cute I just had to review it. I love both the picture and the poem. I think we have all been there. First is the invitation, then comes the inspiration and then you close with the irrigation. I loved it. Embrace the Love from Above.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for your kindness and the stars. It was just a silly little poem but it made me laugh. Glad it did you too!
smiles, Carol
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My pleasure and privilege. Embrace the Love from Above.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, No, Don't Tickle Me, has the right set up and seems to find a poor lad facing an assault while in a vulnerable state. Tee Hee.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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This 5-7-5, No, Don't Tickle Me, has the right set up and seems to find a poor lad facing an assault while in a vulnerable state. Tee Hee.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Thank you for enjoying my silly little poem. If it made you smile, I am happy.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
This brought a smile to my face, which was the purpose of the contest. The expression on the cartoon boy's face is priceless, and your poem is ekphrastically perfect, describing exactly what he might be thinking. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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This brought a smile to my face, which was the purpose of the contest. The expression on the cartoon boy's face is priceless, and your poem is ekphrastically perfect, describing exactly what he might be thinking. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this silly little poem. If you smiled, I am happy. Have a great day! Smiles, Carol
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This type of scenario happens way too often; why don't they pull up their pants? To tickle someone could lead too a police report and probably an overnight stay behind bars.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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This type of scenario happens way too often; why don't they pull up their pants? To tickle someone could lead too a police report and probably an overnight stay behind bars.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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thanks for enjoying the silly little poem. Much appreciated. Have a great day.
smiles, Carol
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Ha! ha! Amusing 5-7-5 poem indeed. The third satori line is superbly crafted Reminded me of my boyhood days. I love the accompanying cute looking pic too. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Ha! ha! Amusing 5-7-5 poem indeed. The third satori line is superbly crafted Reminded me of my boyhood days. I love the accompanying cute looking pic too. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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glad you enjoyed the silly poem. If it made you smile, I am thrilled.
Have a great day! Smiles, Carol
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I enjoyed this little 5-7-5 poem very much. It did indeed bring a smile to my face, and the full line end rhymes were a wonderful bonus. Skillful writing in my opinion.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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I enjoyed this little 5-7-5 poem very much. It did indeed bring a smile to my face, and the full line end rhymes were a wonderful bonus. Skillful writing in my opinion.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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thank you so much, Katherine.
I truly appreciate your kindness. Glad you enjoyed the silly little poem. Smiling lifts our spirits and I am pleased it did yours.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Patty Palmer
The poem fits the rules of the prompt. Knowing he pees when he gets tickled he turns around and pees on the tree. Guys can do that with that handy gadget they have. LOL
Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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The poem fits the rules of the prompt. Knowing he pees when he gets tickled he turns around and pees on the tree. Guys can do that with that handy gadget they have. LOL
Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Thank you for enjoying this bit of humor. I am glad that I could make you smile. My apologies for being so late in responding to your kind review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Mia Twysted
I had a little giggle at his piece. I can see this all going down. Little kids have a harder time holding it when they are tickled. The tree sighing with glee leads me to believe it has been a hot summer with little rain.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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I had a little giggle at his piece. I can see this all going down. Little kids have a harder time holding it when they are tickled. The tree sighing with glee leads me to believe it has been a hot summer with little rain.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Thank you for enjoying this bit of humor. I am glad that I could make you smile. My apologies for being so late in responding to your kind review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
No, Don't Tickle Me
Interesting poem entry for the Just for Fun (5-7-5) writing prompt. Good syllables count. The connection between lines can be improved. Now it sounds like a list of three separate phrases.
What I mean...
if you tickle me
I'll yell, "Stop before I pee"--
parched tree sighs with glee
Nice ending. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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No, Don't Tickle Me
Interesting poem entry for the Just for Fun (5-7-5) writing prompt. Good syllables count. The connection between lines can be improved. Now it sounds like a list of three separate phrases.
What I mean...
if you tickle me
I'll yell, "Stop before I pee"--
parched tree sighs with glee
Nice ending. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Thank you for enjoying this bit of humor. I am glad that I could make you smile. My apologies for being so late in responding to your kind review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from MissMerri
Hahaha... yes I laughed. Very clever and cute poem and a great entry for this contest. The picture you chose to illustrate it is perfect too. A cute little story told in three lines and all three rhyme too. Well done and I wish you much luck in the contest. MM
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Hahaha... yes I laughed. Very clever and cute poem and a great entry for this contest. The picture you chose to illustrate it is perfect too. A cute little story told in three lines and all three rhyme too. Well done and I wish you much luck in the contest. MM
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Glad I could give you a smile... Thanks for the kind words and the review. have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
