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Biden Fiasco

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Essays About The Biden Presidency

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Comment from Sally Law
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Sorry to be out of sixes in my catching up time. This is as exceptional as the others and foundational to your theme of fiascos. Apparently, the presidency can be bought, and by those who aren't in it for Americans. I think that's the scariest part of this Unhappy Meal, supersized though it be. These family members and friends of the fallen are hurting. Americans by and large are still reeling from 9/11 with so many unanswered questions. If the President can't get to the bottom of it, or refuses to get to the bottom, vote him out. I say let's do another Nuremberg Trial and prosecute these murderers.

Thank you for sharing and for providing the NBC news link. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

I completely messed this up fully intending to give you a six. So sorry! Thereā??s no way to change this, unfortunately. I hope you will post again soon. Iā??m blind and this happens to me sometimes.
Please forgive!
Sal :))

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
    Appreciate your insightful review.
reply by Sally Law on 16-Aug-2021
    You?re most welcome. :))
Comment from NABattaglia
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Thank you for sharing this. You wove your opinion, some news sources, and the lyrics into this piece in an interesting way that was easy-to-follow and added to--not detracted from--the work. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2021
    Appreciate the thoughtful review.
Comment from robyn corum
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Brett,

I am still confused. After I read the other post - wherein you mentioned this original piece, I had to come over and see this one. It baffles me to no end how any president could excuse these actions. I don't care about the political climate, I don't care about relations between countries. The right thing to do is ALWAYS the right thing to do.

Thanks!

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
    No disagreement from me. Those documents should have been revealed twenty years ago. Appreciate your thoughts.
Comment from Senyai
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Hi Brett,

I, for one, will never forget that day! Biden will never do the right thing for these patient people who lost loved ones in those two tower's collapse.

He has proven to be the most ineffective president of all time, well, maybe President Buchanan was worse. Never the less, Biden is just a puppet for the Left. I can't see Biden doing anything on his own without directions from his Left minions.

Great and timely piece as September 11 is upon us in one month.

Glad these 1800 have taken a stand. Hope they eventually get the Saudi's held accountable, but don't have faith Biden and his administration will come through for them.

Have a great week :))
Senyai


 Comment Written 09-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
    Appreciate the thoughtful and thorough review.
Comment from Aiona
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Very nice essay. Just a few typos:

1. "Although that is fair, and not asking too much, would strongly recommend they do not hold their breath on that to occur."

I think you left out the word "I" between "much," and "would."

2. "The report also proved Saudi Arabia a major financier of Al Queda."

It's always hard to translate Arabic into Romanized English, but I do believe the more common spelling is "Al-Qaeda." "Al Queda" sounds like a south-of-the-border restaurant. LOL!

3. "However, there is an old saying that goes first time for everything."

I believe the quote should be in quotes.

ex. However, there is an old saying that goes, "There's a first time for everything."

Lastly
4. As the 9-11 Families said, "Twenty years is way too long for anybody, especially thousands of American families, to learn the truth about what happened to their loved ones. The President of the United States should be standing next to us"

You need a period at the end of the quote.

ex. be standing next to us."



 Comment Written 08-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
    Appreciate the in-depth review and the catch.
Comment from judiverse
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I agree that Biden should release that information, but wonder if he will. He seems bent on appeasing bad actors like Iran and now Saudi Arabia, and withdrawal of troops from Afghanistan is allowing Al Qaeda to take over. If Biden was going to have the documents released, he would surely have done it by now. He is more interested in pleasing the Progressives that these families. Yours is a very impressive presentation. Good information and logically presented. judi

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
    Appreciate the sixer and the insightful review.
Comment from Terry Overton
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I agree with your thoughts. I'm not sure there is anything we can believe from his mouth but I also think someone else is in control of him. Sad state of affairs for our county.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
    Much appreciate that insightful review.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
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Brett:

It is terribly sad that the term "honest politician" is likely the largest oxymoron in the history of man. It's just that some of them don't pay attention to any of their own 'feel good' sound bites.

jan

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
    So true. Appreciate the review.
Comment from amahra
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Don't really know or care what Biden will or will not do. I don't even watch the mainstream news anymore because it's too one-sided. But I do like your essay and your attempt to keep the 1800 on our minds. They should never be forgotten. Great essay and love your artwork.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
    Much appreciate the review. Got to take what mainstream news says with a grain of salt these days.
reply by amahra on 08-Aug-2021
Comment from equestrik
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Good writing and you have stated the facts and done it with class and decency which seems so sadly lacking these days. Well done and I wish you the best.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
    Glad you enjoyed this essay. Much appreciate the review.