The Write Answer
Writing helps fulfill ones life59 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I'm sorry if you are getting
ignored by the younger
generation, jaybird.
-I'm more sorry that it is
within your own family.
-I agree with you about
picking up your pen and writing.
-You wrote a good poem with
good thoughts and imagery.
-I doubt you caused anything,
and your closing lines show
what you can do to boost your spirits.
-Have a good rest of your week.
Sending along a little cheerð???ð???ð???
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-I'm sorry if you are getting
ignored by the younger
generation, jaybird.
-I'm more sorry that it is
within your own family.
-I agree with you about
picking up your pen and writing.
-You wrote a good poem with
good thoughts and imagery.
-I doubt you caused anything,
and your closing lines show
what you can do to boost your spirits.
-Have a good rest of your week.
Sending along a little cheerð???ð???ð???
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Jaybird1,
Nice piece of poetry having lucid phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme.
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy. Best of Luck!
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Hello Jaybird1,
Nice piece of poetry having lucid phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme.
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy. Best of Luck!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The Write Answer
by jaybird1
I'm sorry your family ignores you, that's wrong. You should be honored and care for. They are lucky to have you. I wish I had my father. Well done. Writing helps me too.
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The Write Answer
by jaybird1
I'm sorry your family ignores you, that's wrong. You should be honored and care for. They are lucky to have you. I wish I had my father. Well done. Writing helps me too.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"The Write Answer", is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. Wisdom shows in doing what we excel in. I look for ward to seeing your next post.
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"The Write Answer", is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. Wisdom shows in doing what we excel in. I look for ward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
Comment from mermaids
I wish the younger generation would pay more attention to seniors like you mention in your words. Poetry is great therapy for when we are down and need to connect. Your poetic form here captures feelings that all can relate to.
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I wish the younger generation would pay more attention to seniors like you mention in your words. Poetry is great therapy for when we are down and need to connect. Your poetic form here captures feelings that all can relate to.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
Comment from harmony13
Please continue to write - I like the areas you address. I think we all
go through what the author has described. I believe it is part of aging.
Just hang there. Do you ever do reviews!? I think this author would be
a great reviewer. Have a good week!.....Maria
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Please continue to write - I like the areas you address. I think we all
go through what the author has described. I believe it is part of aging.
Just hang there. Do you ever do reviews!? I think this author would be
a great reviewer. Have a good week!.....Maria
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
Comment from Sherry Asbury
My poetic friend...you speak volumes, break trails, praise our Lord, and please so many ears and senses. I believe poets often feel as you do - but in years forward your words will ring for new generations.
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My poetic friend...you speak volumes, break trails, praise our Lord, and please so many ears and senses. I believe poets often feel as you do - but in years forward your words will ring for new generations.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
Comment from jenintorre
Hi Jaybird
I think we have a lot in common. I also feel invisible a lot of the time, it happens when you get to a certain age but we do have our poetry, thank goodness. Love Jen.
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Hi Jaybird
I think we have a lot in common. I also feel invisible a lot of the time, it happens when you get to a certain age but we do have our poetry, thank goodness. Love Jen.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
What a great tribute to writing jaybird! I've others say it's therapeutic as well.
I like you good, strong rhymes and the poem flows smoothly.
Keep in writing and smiling!
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What a great tribute to writing jaybird! I've others say it's therapeutic as well.
I like you good, strong rhymes and the poem flows smoothly.
Keep in writing and smiling!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a fine poem, Jay. I bet they know you exist though, and might even wonder what kind of things you are writing. I find getting out a pen and paper can make people quite curious. lol
You have however most poetically captured that "feeling" of being invisible. You are definitely not invisible to your FanStory family.
Always a treat to read your work. :))
Gloria
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This is a fine poem, Jay. I bet they know you exist though, and might even wonder what kind of things you are writing. I find getting out a pen and paper can make people quite curious. lol
You have however most poetically captured that "feeling" of being invisible. You are definitely not invisible to your FanStory family.
Always a treat to read your work. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
