Was It Fate
Between 100 and 150 words story contest entry2 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Bravo for ingenuity and creativity!
First, you lead the reader into the depths of the unknown where war causes unspeakable tragedies and then you pop the bubble with your comical play with the required words. Simply enjoyable and definitely a contender for the win!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Bravo for ingenuity and creativity!
First, you lead the reader into the depths of the unknown where war causes unspeakable tragedies and then you pop the bubble with your comical play with the required words. Simply enjoyable and definitely a contender for the win!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Carol. I was just in one of those ridiculous moods. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness. I hope you have yourself a wonderful rest of your weekend.
Comment from Janilou
Well, this is a clever contest entry, although having had a son who went to Iraq to fight, and who lost two of his fellow soldiers in Iraq, it was a little hard to read at the same time.
I didn't see any errors.
All the best with the writing prompt.
Jan
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Well, this is a clever contest entry, although having had a son who went to Iraq to fight, and who lost two of his fellow soldiers in Iraq, it was a little hard to read at the same time.
I didn't see any errors.
All the best with the writing prompt.
Jan
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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My son-in-law lost some friends over there too. Very tragic situations. Glad he made it home in one piece. Thank you for the great review and stars, Jan. Have a great rest of your weekend.