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Comment from equestrik
I feel like the meaning is able to be gleaned from your words here but it is a bit too fractured for me to really enjoy the read. I wish you all the best with your writing.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021
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I feel like the meaning is able to be gleaned from your words here but it is a bit too fractured for me to really enjoy the read. I wish you all the best with your writing.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021
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I'm struggling with my writes, seeking future revisions to better this particular write coherency. Thanking you for your warm and honest review of this work.
Comment from 20hrockwell
I very much enjoyed the 6th stanza. I like that the reader fills in gaps to enrich the sentiment of the poem. Wonderful, intriguing read. I also appreciate that it's more than the exploration of an idea but a story, a story that can be applied to all of our lives.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021
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I very much enjoyed the 6th stanza. I like that the reader fills in gaps to enrich the sentiment of the poem. Wonderful, intriguing read. I also appreciate that it's more than the exploration of an idea but a story, a story that can be applied to all of our lives.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021
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Glad certain aspects in this poem were found appealing to your interests. Thanking you for those encouraging comments.