I very much enjoyed the 6th stanza. I like that the reader fills in gaps to enrich the sentiment of the poem. Wonderful, intriguing read. I also appreciate that it's more than the exploration of an idea but a story, a story that can be applied to all of our lives.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021
Glad certain aspects in this poem were found appealing to your interests. Thanking you for those encouraging comments.