Hanging On 'Till You're Gone
A sonnet about caring47 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
Dear Jay, I agree with you 100% when you say "Love, care and compassion is a very enriching way to live one's life." I think your lovely poem tells the story very well. You give us clear instructions just how to do what you advise, and you do it with your usual excellent rhymes and conversational meter. I enjoyed reading this very much. Hugs, MM
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Dear Jay, I agree with you 100% when you say "Love, care and compassion is a very enriching way to live one's life." I think your lovely poem tells the story very well. You give us clear instructions just how to do what you advise, and you do it with your usual excellent rhymes and conversational meter. I enjoyed reading this very much. Hugs, MM
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
Comment from Paulette Wooley1
Its a very kind way to look at your life and the people around you. its a thoughtful and inspiring epitaph. something one would be remembered by after living a full life.
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Its a very kind way to look at your life and the people around you. its a thoughtful and inspiring epitaph. something one would be remembered by after living a full life.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
Comment from mermaids
Good advice here on how to live life, hug people and show less hate, are words of wisdom. Your poem inspires the reader to think more about their behavior and attempt to live a happier life. Well said in poetic form.
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Good advice here on how to live life, hug people and show less hate, are words of wisdom. Your poem inspires the reader to think more about their behavior and attempt to live a happier life. Well said in poetic form.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
Comment from QC Poet
Always a Pleasure and Uplifting message placed into your work and poetry. Thanks for Sharing your Talent and Spirit as shown in your poetry. Blessings to you
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Always a Pleasure and Uplifting message placed into your work and poetry. Thanks for Sharing your Talent and Spirit as shown in your poetry. Blessings to you
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
Comment from equestrik
These are wonderful and positive words which are also wise and encouraging to all of humanity to take note that it matters how we live life and that we strive to live with integrity.
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These are wonderful and positive words which are also wise and encouraging to all of humanity to take note that it matters how we live life and that we strive to live with integrity.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
Comment from Mia Twysted
Very encouraging. A plea to people to live a more peaceful life. So when they make it to the end of it they don't have so many regreats.
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Very encouraging. A plea to people to live a more peaceful life. So when they make it to the end of it they don't have so many regreats.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
What a wonderfully penned poem. Full of wisdom that comes from the experience of facing life in all its idiosyncrasies. Finding family is pleasant, Finding a love to cherish is the key. We should let the river of love expression flow from your heart telling your family how much of a love you have for them. Thanks for sharing!
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What a wonderfully penned poem. Full of wisdom that comes from the experience of facing life in all its idiosyncrasies. Finding family is pleasant, Finding a love to cherish is the key. We should let the river of love expression flow from your heart telling your family how much of a love you have for them. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
Comment from Senyai
Hi JayBird,
Another great verse, written by the Sage, himself! Wise words that we should all follow to live a long and fruitful life! Be kind, laugh more, love long and pray for guidance each day.
" Show dear ones and friends great moments of love,
control temper you may oft times have shown;
Be thankful to the gate keeper above,
for, your lease on life is not yours to own."
Perfect.
Have a great week!
Senyai
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Hi JayBird,
Another great verse, written by the Sage, himself! Wise words that we should all follow to live a long and fruitful life! Be kind, laugh more, love long and pray for guidance each day.
" Show dear ones and friends great moments of love,
control temper you may oft times have shown;
Be thankful to the gate keeper above,
for, your lease on life is not yours to own."
Perfect.
Have a great week!
Senyai
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
Comment from Wendy G
Such a heartfelt plea to make the important people in one's life know that they are loved. It is a mutual blessing. One can then be in peace, and await the end knowing one has done one's best to live at peace with all, to show love and compassion to all. Excellent, well expressed with the usual smooth rhyme and flow.
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Such a heartfelt plea to make the important people in one's life know that they are loved. It is a mutual blessing. One can then be in peace, and await the end knowing one has done one's best to live at peace with all, to show love and compassion to all. Excellent, well expressed with the usual smooth rhyme and flow.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
Comment from E. Denison
Great entry here, jaybird1. There are zones cement pieces of advice/considerations sprinkled through here reminding that life is finite and we must do the meaningful things. Thank you for sharing.
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Great entry here, jaybird1. There are zones cement pieces of advice/considerations sprinkled through here reminding that life is finite and we must do the meaningful things. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
