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The Greatest Gift

No greater love has ever been

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Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Hello, Anne.
Your few words speak volumes about love, and a savior who on earth loved us enough to redeem us through His life and Death.
Beautiful photo too, Anne.
Good luck in the contests.
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much for your review, Cindy
reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 22-Jul-2021
    You?re welcome.😊
Comment from robyn corum
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Anne,

Well, first of all, I agree a thousand percent with your beautiful message. *smile* BUT - this is just lovely! It's just thirteen words, but look at the PUNCH they pack, right? You've certainly summed up the whole story of the Gospel of Good News! This is wonderful and you've maintained the required syllable count. I think it's a great entry. Good luck!

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much, Robyn, for reading and reviewing. I am glad the message is clear.
Comment from Begin Again
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Good morning, Anne

I couldn't begin to think of any better choice of words than those you have used in your poem. Our Lord is the only one whose love never waivers or turns away from us.... Well done!

Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much, Carol, for reading and reviewing.
Comment from lyenochka
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Love how you put the gospel in a nutshell with this 5-7-5 poem! Your Scripture references fit perfectly and you're right that Jesus becoming man to redeem humanity was truly the "greatest gift of love!" Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate your support.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image and
presentation, Anne.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-A good comparison to
the "gift of love" and
the message of redemption
to go with it and close the poem.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much for your review
reply by Pam (respa) on 21-Jul-2021
    You are welcome.
Comment from Carol Clark2
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This is a beautiful 5-7-5 for the contest. I particularly love the second and third lines. The whole poem is well done. I'm sorry I don't have a six for you. Best wishes in the contest. Carol

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much, Carol
reply by Carol Clark2 on 21-Jul-2021
    You're welcome. Blessings. Carol
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Perfectly done 5-7-5 piece using the greatest verse from the Bible. To give ones life for perfect strangers, sinners, yearning to be a lamb of God, is the only true sacrifice. Very well done

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
    Thank you, Barb, for your review
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Anne--really a great poem regardless of contest or not. Your syllable count is correct, the image is awesome, and your message is clear. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

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 Comment Written 21-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
    Thanks so much, Jan. I appreciate your review
Comment from royowen
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There is nothing greater than the love of God, to bring the Heavenly presence dow to earth to rescue man, we can't go to Him, but He came down to us, setting aside the wealth of Heaven, so that we could take it up, well done Anne, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 21-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
    Thanks, Roy. I am thankful for that great love.
reply by royowen on 21-Jul-2021
    Me too, where would we be without it?
reply by royowen on 22-Jul-2021
    Most welcome