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The Greatest Gift

No greater love has ever been

29 total reviews 
Comment from Raul1
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is a very inspirational poem. I like your poetry. Excellent work! I see no mistakes. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2021
    Thank you for your review
reply by Raul1 on 24-Jul-2021
    You're welcome.
reply by Raul1 on 24-Jul-2021
    You're welcome.
Comment from karenina
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True this! Finest sacrifice ever made for our salvation! A GREAT 5-7-5----I have no idea if this contest was voted on as I was away for a week. If so, I sure hope you won! --Karenina (via Jess)

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2021
    Thank you for your review. Deadline for this is July 30, not one we can vote on.
reply by karenina on 26-Jul-2021
    Ah, so a committee contest? Well, best of luck!--Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
    Thank you. Hope you are feeling better.
reply by karenina on 27-Jul-2021
    Every day is a step in the right direction!--Thanks, Karenina
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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God is always ready to give. Forever. We should be prepared to receive them. They come gift wrapped. I loved your beautifully penned spiritual poem. Thanks for sharing! Good luck!

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much for your review
Comment from mermaids
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There is a spiritual feel and flow to your words. You say much using the 5-7-5 form. "To redeem mankind" is a perfect last line that sums up the first two. Excellent faith based poem.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much for your reveiew
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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I wish I had six stars...you deserve them. This simple verse says it all...sacrifice is a beautiful thing. This should be on a plaque for our walls. Best of luck in the contest, dear one.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much, Sherry
reply by Sherry Asbury on 23-Jul-2021
    You are welcome, dear Poet!
Comment from Jarvis Popovich
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A nice recollection of truth :) thanks it is short and sweet. Maybe not the greatest gift, perhaps his sacrifice daily works true for me, drawn more poignant as He was flesh once. Thanks for writing!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
    You are welcome
Comment from Sugarray77
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Well said, Anne. I enjoyed reading your verse that built my faith and encourage me. Well written and extremely meaningful. Great job and good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
    Thank you, Melissa
Comment from Sanku
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Well written short poem. IT is timely because the world is turning crazy .He bite the punishment for all mens sins.That is the best proof of love All the best

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much for your review.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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This talented poet's work is short, succinct and spiritually-uplifting. With a minimum of words, this writer has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on? Woven through each line are the golden threads of truth.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much for your review
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 23-Jul-2021

    You're very welcome.
Comment from pharp
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Anne,

Outstanding! Virtual six-star (sorry I'm all out)

You did an exceptional job in the penning of this 5-7-5 poem for this writing prompt.

A powerful message indeed. I know God is smiling at this beautiful praise giving Him all the Honor and Glory for His love for us. This is a beautiful poem to rest my weary soul and give thanks tonight.

Thanks for sharing this most amazing and enjoyable read.

May God continue to bless and keep you and your family in His loving care. The very best to you in the contest.

Hugs...Portia


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much, Portia. Glad you liked my poem. God bless you.