Coffee Cup
Ekphrastic Shadorma 3/5/3/3/7/515 total reviews
Comment from PoemsOfDD
I thought I'd pop in see and which poem is teetering on the edge of being recognised and I found this shadorma ekphrastic poem. So worthy of a ribbon. The story within the poem is haunting and grips the reader with the silence that falls with trepidation after each sentence. Excellent write.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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I thought I'd pop in see and which poem is teetering on the edge of being recognised and I found this shadorma ekphrastic poem. So worthy of a ribbon. The story within the poem is haunting and grips the reader with the silence that falls with trepidation after each sentence. Excellent write.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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Wow, you are very kind to check which of my poems needed a a review to reach recognition. Thank you very much, DD. I do appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
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Absolutely my pleasure :-) ~DDx
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This described fearful anticipation as the cup of coffee is somehow compensation for the bad news waiting to be delivered, or maybe this peaceful moment will soon become chaos for this person, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2021
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This described fearful anticipation as the cup of coffee is somehow compensation for the bad news waiting to be delivered, or maybe this peaceful moment will soon become chaos for this person, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem, Dolly. I hope you have a great weekend.
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Comment from amahra
I read a book some time ago with famous paintings and poetry that interpret what the writer saw in them. I've been in love with that time of poetry every since. So thank you for crafting one and informing me that it has a name.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
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I read a book some time ago with famous paintings and poetry that interpret what the writer saw in them. I've been in love with that time of poetry every since. So thank you for crafting one and informing me that it has a name.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
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Comment from Badger_29
Dear Gypsy,
I enjoyed this because it built up and left three or wondering where did he go, what is the bad news today is going to get it, what kind of coffee was he drinking, when will he return?
The picture matches perfectly, and the flow is impeccable.
Read aloud, it sounds well balanced***
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Darren
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
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Dear Gypsy,
I enjoyed this because it built up and left three or wondering where did he go, what is the bad news today is going to get it, what kind of coffee was he drinking, when will he return?
The picture matches perfectly, and the flow is impeccable.
Read aloud, it sounds well balanced***
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Darren
Comment Written 23-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
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Hello, Darren, Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
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You are very welcome~
Darren
Comment from Mark Schardine
and the chair
it's pulled out
waiting for him to get back --
before the bad news
You brilliantly capture that moment when a person knows not to expect any good news, or the return of the missing person. Sadness imposes itself, perhaps never to leave.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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and the chair
it's pulled out
waiting for him to get back --
before the bad news
You brilliantly capture that moment when a person knows not to expect any good news, or the return of the missing person. Sadness imposes itself, perhaps never to leave.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and six stars!
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Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy Rose,
This is such an awesome poem. You utilized the photo well, and it is a poem that is not resolved in the end, and that is its charm.
Excellent work, Gypsy Rose.
Good luck in all that you do.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Gypsy Rose,
This is such an awesome poem. You utilized the photo well, and it is a poem that is not resolved in the end, and that is its charm.
Excellent work, Gypsy Rose.
Good luck in all that you do.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 22-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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You?re welcome, Gypsy
Cindy
Comment from Ricky1024
Shadorna.
Based on the subject of coffee.
We all drink it to an extent some Like It Black some Like It sugary sweet with cream.
(If you know what I mean?)
Being a Latter-Day Saint with the Church of Jesus Christ we are forbidden from any caffeine and consumption any degree.
But I partake in coffee to a limited degree.
Well written and good luck with this!
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Shadorna.
Based on the subject of coffee.
We all drink it to an extent some Like It Black some Like It sugary sweet with cream.
(If you know what I mean?)
Being a Latter-Day Saint with the Church of Jesus Christ we are forbidden from any caffeine and consumption any degree.
But I partake in coffee to a limited degree.
Well written and good luck with this!
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"
Comment Written 22-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
This is really wonderful. It certainly paints a picture and creates a mood.
Very striking imagery and effect.
This looks challenging but I might give it a try.
Beautiful!
Katiemae
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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This is really wonderful. It certainly paints a picture and creates a mood.
Very striking imagery and effect.
This looks challenging but I might give it a try.
Beautiful!
Katiemae
Comment Written 22-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for your review. I hope you do try it, it's fun.
Gypsy hugs
Gypsy
Comment from E. Denison
Gypsy - great work here. A brief poem that certainly speaks to a larger, darker narrative. I like the imagery you're working with and your author notes on the shadorma. I was not familiar with this type of poetry before this post. This was a great introduction - I'll have to give it a try sometime. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Gypsy - great work here. A brief poem that certainly speaks to a larger, darker narrative. I like the imagery you're working with and your author notes on the shadorma. I was not familiar with this type of poetry before this post. This was a great introduction - I'll have to give it a try sometime. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I really appreciate it.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Paul McFarland
great job in creating suspense. The reader can let their imagination run free. A good example of what a single word can do to change things. If "bad" was left out, the poem would convey a very different feeling.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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great job in creating suspense. The reader can let their imagination run free. A good example of what a single word can do to change things. If "bad" was left out, the poem would convey a very different feeling.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I really appreciate it.
Gypsy hugs
