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Retirement

a short story and poem

49 total reviews 
Comment from Wendy G
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Oh I am so sorry to hear of his passing. He died the same day as my brother then. Thank you for letting us know via your tribute. You wrote it well. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thanks, Wendy
Comment from royowen
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Bob wrote an autobiography par excellence calling "Falling up the stairs, I actually picked he was writing about himself and his siblings fostered out to some incredibly cruel adults. And who can forget Cleve Hawkins and crew? Beautifully written Bill, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thanks, Roy.
reply by royowen on 22-Jul-2021
    Welcome Bill
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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OMG! I can't believe that Bob is no more. I was under the impression he was recovering in the hospital. I am shocked beyond words to learn he has passed away. He was always so kind and had encouraging words for me. I will miss him dearly. This is a fine tribute to Bob. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thanks, Seshadri
Comment from Senyai
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Hi Bill,

Thank you so much for writing this excellent nod to Mastery as we have called him for decades on this site. Bob was a truly gifted writer that had novel after novel published.

I am shocked to hear he has passed away this July. We will miss him, he was a good soul who always has a kind word. A Marine, as you too are a Marine, Bill, and we thank you and all the men and woman that serve !

Mastery will be missed. Your tribute here in this closing chapter is such a kind and honorable thing to do. Thank you.

His books will live on for us to read, which is the gift he left for us.

Senyai

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thanks, Senyai. Yes, Bob was a good soul and a kind person.
reply by Senyai on 22-Jul-2021
    Bob will be missed. Thank you again for sending him off with an amazing goodbye.

    Senyai
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh, I didn't know. I thought he was in the hospital but then returned home. So sorry to hear. Thanks, Bill, for this thoughtful tribute using Bob's book titles in your poem. Bob had so many interesting jobs in his life, I wonder what amazing jobs he'll have in Heaven.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Well, there?s guarding the streets, then, when I get there he?ll have to investigate just HOW that happened.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Touching tribute piece with a whimsical twist. Clever idea to incorporate Bob's titles and cover pic. Thanks for notes. Condolences; clearly you knew him well.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thanks, Liz
Comment from blondie560
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Bill, anything that is a tribute to Bob deserves six stars. When I first started publishing my writing here, he was very helpful and his advice was accepted gladly. I'm saddened that we are never going to enjoy his encouragement and his writing again. Rest in peace, Bob.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thanks, Sally
Comment from damommy
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Nice tribute to Bob. He was a good friend to me, and I will miss him very much. Comforting to know he will see his son again. Thank you for sharing this.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
    Thanks for responding, Yvonne.
Comment from Susan Larson
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This is so sad. I wasn't aware until I read this. He befriended me not all that long ago and became one of my fans. We had a common bond through our sons and for our love of writing. He sort of mentored me and I treasure all of his words. What a master -y of a writer -
and a man

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
    Thanks for responding, Susan, and for the pump.
Comment from amada
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Oh, what a terrible loss. I just can't imagine this site without the company of his great and gracious characters. He was a master in reading the human soul, and writing characters who lived in between those lines. He helped me, he said I had talent...May God bless him.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
    Thank you, amada. He leaves a big hole in many ways.