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Retirement

a short story and poem

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Comment from Ulla
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Hi Bill. Oh so Mastery, Bob has passed away. I knew he was sick an in hospital. He was very prolific on this site and did very well. May he rest in peace.
Thanks for sharing and writing such a fun piece to his memory. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thanks, Ulla
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
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Bill - This is a well written story / poem and a most fitting tribute to Bob. He will always be remembered by his books. Stay well and best regards - Jerry

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thanks, Jerry.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this awesome poetic tribute to Bob, Mastery. I know we will all miss his detective, Cleve and the rest of the characters. I am praying for his family and friends.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thanks, Barbara
Comment from elchupakabra
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I'm sorry to hear about Bob, we sometimes had our contentions but he was a good man and a great writer. Thank you for sharing this piece, it is a nice remembrance in his honor.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thanks, elchupakabra.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Well done, Bill. This is a wonderfully clever tribute to Bob who gave us our favorite detective Cleve Hawkins. I loved the line about Mo in the tribute.
"I figured he'd be a gumshoe until Mo figured out she'd have to hire him to get his attention."
Yes, We will miss Bob, another member of our brave fighting Marine Corps. God Bless his family and friends. Nancy:)
I was trying to remember the name of Cleve's homeless friend. "Jeebers?" Or something like that. It was a nice touch in the book.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Jeeber was his cop pal and Deckle was his homeless friend.
reply by nancy_e_davis on 23-Jul-2021
    Right. Well, at least I got a name right. LOL
    Thanks for the answer. We will miss Bob.
    Nancy:)
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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It should be six stars, Bill. This is such an apt tribute. You know I have created a book "Memories of Mastery" to which you might want to add another piece. BTW he died on July 8th. Your tribute is so unique. Thanks for sharing.

Ralf

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    I read his obituary online as July 1.
reply by Raffaelina Lowcock on 22-Jul-2021
    His wife called me on July 11th, three days before the funeral, and said he passed last Thursday on July 8th. Someone made a mistake.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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What a wonderful, moving tribute. May Mastery swim with the stars and light our little world once in a while. You have honored him and sent him a message that he was loved and revered. Great work!

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thanks, Sherry
Comment from Ben Colder
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Bob was a writer in his genera, and many followed his work. I can only hope He knew the Lord on a first-name basis. Thanks for sharing your work. Pray for strength for his family.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thanks, Ben
Comment from Janet Foor
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I was so sorry to hear about Bob. I was looking forward to the next chapter of The Deceivers. He was a good friend and will be greatly missed.

Thank you for sharing.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thanks, Janet
Comment from dragonpoet
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Bill,
It is so sad to hear the Bob has died. He was a great writer. I read all his books and was looking forward to his next chapter. He was helpful and encouraging. He will be missed
This is a good witty story in honor of him. I bet Cleve was a much better detective than these two. I like the use of his bood titles in the poem at the end.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thanks, Joan
reply by dragonpoet on 22-Jul-2021
    You're welcome, Bill.
    Joan