Comment from Katie Mae Dead

Excellent

Great free verse for the contest.
I love the format you used here. Your separation of paragraphs works well and it flows smootly.
I like how you separated the words at the end. I always thought that makes for effective free verse.
Good luck in the contest!
Katiemae

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2021

Comment from gudbjorg

Excellent

This is a very relatable passage and something very important for each individual and many die, without finding the answer. I believe wisdom and understanding are gifts form God and they that seek after it will find it.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2021

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Welcome to FanStory. I really enjoyed your free verse poem, jusylee. Life's relationships are complicated, but worth the effort when love is at stake.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2021

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

This is such a beautiful, thought provoking and relatable poem. I can give a thumbs up to all of this. I fall short everyday but rise up to continue to be better, also every day. Well done!

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2021