Wings of Lace
The Beauty of the Butterfly7 total reviews
Comment from Charlotte Morse
Hi Nancy,
Yes I did enjoy both the poem and the photo very much, thanks for sharing them!
I see you haven't posted much recently, but please keep writing your poetry, you write so well.
Charlotte
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Hi Nancy,
Yes I did enjoy both the poem and the photo very much, thanks for sharing them!
I see you haven't posted much recently, but please keep writing your poetry, you write so well.
Charlotte
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Hi Charlotte, Thank you so much for the wonderful review! I'm so glad you enjoyed both the poem and the image. I've been writing some poems for some of MKFlood's videos so if you view his videos' you might see some of my poems. I did one for Caribbean Winds, Travels of the Wanderlust, and "A Women in Love". So glad you enjoy what I write! :o) Nancy
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is beautifully written description of such a beautiful creature. Very well done. It has a beautiful flow and rhyme scheme. I love your photo it compliments your words so well. I'm a lover of butterflies myself. So graceful and spiritual.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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This is beautifully written description of such a beautiful creature. Very well done. It has a beautiful flow and rhyme scheme. I love your photo it compliments your words so well. I'm a lover of butterflies myself. So graceful and spiritual.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Hi Joanne, Please forgive me for being so late with my thank you note.I had some computer issues. You lovely review made my heart sing! Thank you so much for the all the lovely compliments and the incredible six star rating! You left behind a pretty nice smile too! Blessings!!! :o) Helvi
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Glorious! A stunning rendering of this ethereal creature--elegant imagery and graceful phrasing are spot-on for the subject of this paean. Lovely piece.
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Glorious! A stunning rendering of this ethereal creature--elegant imagery and graceful phrasing are spot-on for the subject of this paean. Lovely piece.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2021
Comment from equestrik
Beautiful, Beautiful write! I love the picture as well as, of course, your well constructed write to go with this picture. I feel that butterflies are messengers from Heaven.
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Beautiful, Beautiful write! I love the picture as well as, of course, your well constructed write to go with this picture. I feel that butterflies are messengers from Heaven.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2021
Comment from RodG
I really love this tribute to the BUTTERFLY. You describe her perfectly with such phrases as "wings of lace," "the flutter of a rainbow's glow, "and this small garden sprite." Your smooth-flowing meter--which imitates her flight--really impresses me, too. This is a wonderful poem!
Rod
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2021
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I really love this tribute to the BUTTERFLY. You describe her perfectly with such phrases as "wings of lace," "the flutter of a rainbow's glow, "and this small garden sprite." Your smooth-flowing meter--which imitates her flight--really impresses me, too. This is a wonderful poem!
Rod
Comment Written 27-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2021
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Rod, I don't think there are any words to describe what I am feeling right now. I was more than honored by your 6 star rating, then discovered you not only bookmarked my poem but became a fan to. WOW!!! I don't know how things get any better than that! Thank you SOOOOO much for all those wonderful honors!!!!! I'm SOOOO glad you liked what I wrote to this extent! :o) :o) :o) Nancy
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You are very welcome. I am looking forward to reading future posts. Rod
Comment from Ricky1024
Amazing.
I once found a monarch.
And, butterflies go through the metamorphosis in the form of a Chrysalis.
I didn't know what it was but it was a beautiful, lime, green.
And, it looks like a seashell.
(Conch)
Yes, decorated in black and gold dots around the circular edges.
Of course they nest on milkweed plants and that's where I found it.
So, I put it in the heater room and waited for it to come out of the cocoon.
Yes, In which it did.
Thanks for this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2021
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Amazing.
I once found a monarch.
And, butterflies go through the metamorphosis in the form of a Chrysalis.
I didn't know what it was but it was a beautiful, lime, green.
And, it looks like a seashell.
(Conch)
Yes, decorated in black and gold dots around the circular edges.
Of course they nest on milkweed plants and that's where I found it.
So, I put it in the heater room and waited for it to come out of the cocoon.
Yes, In which it did.
Thanks for this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 27-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2021
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Hi Ricky, I know exactly what you're talking about! When I was a kid I often saw Monarch caterpillars. I was lucky enough to see their lovely soft Jade colored chrysalis. It's definitely the prettiest chrysalis I've ever seen with specks of gold around the top. The other thing I love about them is, shortly before the butterfly emerges, the chrysalis becomes transparent and you can see the butterfly within. That's pretty cool! I used a Monarch Butterfly as my image because I had a great image of one, but any butterfly would fit the description of my poem. :o)
I'm thrilled you liked my poem to the extent you did! Thanks for the absolutely incredible review and for sharing your info on the beautiful Monarch butterfly! :o) :o) :o) Helvi
Comment from E. Denison
Helvi - this poem has a wonderful light, almost effortless, flow about it that is the perfect companion to a narrative about the beautiful butterfly. This was a joy to read - with a rhyme and meter that moved gracefully from start to finish. Thank you for sharing.
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Helvi - this poem has a wonderful light, almost effortless, flow about it that is the perfect companion to a narrative about the beautiful butterfly. This was a joy to read - with a rhyme and meter that moved gracefully from start to finish. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2021
