Comment from pharp

Excellent

Gypsy,

I wish I had a six-star rating to give this beautifully penned Haiku.

Oustanding presentation; I love your colorful message.

Thanks for sharing.

I pray you are having a wonderful day.

Hugs...Portia

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021

Thank you very much, Portia. I appreciate you took the time to read and review my poem.

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Comment from Sarah Butterfly

Exceptional

Beautiful poem. The artwork chosen to accompany your writing is absolutely stunning. Very attractive presentation. Love how you also portayed your message with colors. Nice work! Congrats.

Kind regards
Sarah

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021

Thank you very much for your outstanding review and six stars!! I appreciate your kind words.

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Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Such a lovely poem! The author's words are descriptive, clear and creative.
I thought about the fireflies and how they really do sparkle! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these
words. Hope you are having a great week!.....Maria

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021

Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Maria.

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Comment from Ulla

Excellent

This is wonderful, Marival. I loved it. The imagery is so vivid. I could just imagine it.
'flutter amidst dewy reeds': I loved that line. So well thought out. Thanks so much for sharing. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021

Thank you very much for your review and kind words. I appreciate you took the time to read and review my poem.

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Comment from amada

Excellent

Beautiful and peaceful image, as always, you are a master in short and deep descriptions, dear poet. I like the sense of serenity in your short lines. Your choice of artwork is perfect. I wish you the best in this popular contest.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021

Thank you very much for your review and kind words.

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I have never seen a firefly and the scene must be magical and sparkly and like a fairytale fantasy, especially among the blossom, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021

Thank you very much for your review and kind words.

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Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

GBR,

Do like your overall presentation. Another exceptional illustration is paired with your verse.

I can see how spotlight takes on a certain nuance, but IMHO, given your artwork, moonlight might be an alternative.

Mark

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021

You missed the punchline... fireflies spotlight...

Thanks

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and
presentation, Gypsy.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-Animal groups definitely
have interesting names.
-You wrote a good haiku
with effective nature and
seasonal imagery.
-We can picture the fireflies
and the "dewy reeds."
-A good satori line, too.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

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reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Jun-2021

You are welcome, Gypsy.

reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021

Thank you very much for your review and kind words.

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Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Your words connect two images of fireflies and that of a field of blossoms, love the artwork, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021

Thank you very much, Kym. :)

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Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Ah, I did not know that a group of fireflies is called a sparkle, but it makes sense now that I know.

Great job with this, gypsy. The entire scene plays out with vivid brightness. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021

Thank you very much, Gloria :) may you have a wonderful night.

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