Comment from Luke Martin

Excellent

I think it was very well written. Your work is a lot like mine, I was able to feel the pain in those words as I read them. Great job. You should check out some of my work I have posted and tell me what you think.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2021

When I decided to write this I previously written
"Extractions!" about my dental sufferings recently.
(with oral surgery)
And that's where I got the idea for the word "P a y n e" who was the name I gave my dentist.
It's not old English it's just another derivative of the word pain which I invented.
Which of course is
Spoctologically Spoctogical Logically Logical.
If you are Captain
James T. Kirk of the Starship.
"Enterprise"
When I first thought that up it wasn't too long after the death of Leonard Nimoy.
I then introduced the science fiction piece here and had a couple trekkies go nuts!
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Phillip C Kuhn

Excellent

I really enjoyed this one, more so then your last piece I reviewed, in this poem I genuinely felt sadness, it was moving and touching, the verbiage and wordplay was great, the way you broke each section up shows direct intent with your writing, your art is maturing, I loved it.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2021

Thanks a lot Phillip I really appreciate your review and your time.
Doctor Ricky