Comment from Theodore McDowell

Good

A horribly sad and terrifying story. Well done but some disruptions in the flow to keep the rhymes, which could be cleaned up. Well done and keep up the good work. I'm sorry if the story is true.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021

Thanks and this has been rewritten and posted in a new book entitled.
"My Deeper Understanding the Word Love"
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Very well done, as I was reading your wonderful words I was reminded of a song-the devil came to Georgia- an excellent read and thank you for sharing****kahpot

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021

I enjoyed writing this so much that I rewrote it and presented in a new book entitled,
"My Deeper Understanding of the Word Love"
Thanks kahoot.
Doctor Ricky 1024