Reviews from

Creation

God spoke and it was so...

36 total reviews 
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"Creation", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece.
It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
    Duchess,

    Thanks so much, my sweet and dear friend, for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Hugs...Portia
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 22-Jul-2021
    Portia,

    You're very welcome and certainly deserved both.

    God bless and hugs,
    the Duchess
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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There are two sides to man and we are flawed in many ways, we are complex and scarred by our lives. Faith and belief helps us and gives us hope and I enjoyed your uplifting words here Portia, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
    Dolly,

    Thanks so much for your review, rating, and comments; they are appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your poem is presented beautifully, Portia. I enjoyed reading it. The image and color scheme are perfect. I like the cursive type font, too. Your rhymes work well and there is good flow. You give readers much to think about in your true words. You are a talented spiritual poet.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Jan,

    Your very kind and supportive reviews always bless me.

    Thanks so much for your encouraging comments; they are appreciated.

    Have a wonderful day.
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
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What a wonderful faith related poem.
I like the division and organization of your stanzas.
You have good strong rhymes and the poem flows smoothly.
I wasn't quite sure if you meant this to be a metered poem or not but it is very close.
Thank you for telling this age old story in your lovely poem
Take care
Katiemae Dead

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
    Katiemae,

    Thanks so much for your review, rating, and comments; they are appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from royowen
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Oh yes indeed, somebody wrote about Adam and Eve yesterday, and Lucifer was already here, although God's foreknowledge knew that Adam a Eve would be proved, but such was His desire to save man, He'd already provided Himself as sacrifice to complete the plan. Beautifully written Portia, blessings Roy
Suggestion: an Angel would fall.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Roy,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comment; they are greatly appreciated.

    Thanks so much for the suggestion.

    Have a wonderful and blessed day.

    Blessings...Portia
reply by royowen on 22-Jul-2021
    Most welcome
reply by royowen on 22-Jul-2021
    A pleasure
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Hello, Portia,
I like Christian poems from writers that take verses from the Word and, employing creative twists, write a beautiful poem.
You do this very well. I often wondered why God would create such a vast universe if he chose Jesus to save mankind on Earth, but now I think He made have made it for His enjoyment as you say.
Excellent and well-written poem, Portia.
Blessings and hugs,
Cindy

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Cindy,


    Your very kind and supportive reviews always bless me.

    Thanks so much for your encouraging comments; they are appreciated.

    Have a wonderful day.

    Hugs...Portia
reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 22-Jul-2021
    You?re welcome, Portia
    Afa
    Cindy
Comment from dragonpoet
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Portia,
This artwork and poem blend well together. I like the Salvation history told in this. It tells of the making of the good and the bad.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
    Joan,

    Thanks so much for your review, rating, and comments; they are appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
reply by dragonpoet on 22-Jul-2021
    Don't mention it, Portia.
    Joan
Comment from evesayshi
Exceptional
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In my opinion, a stunning write, appearing inspired and smoothly flowing in easy movement. I felt the grace within the lines and was warmed by it. Thank you to this writer for sharing her inspirational words...

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Eve,

    Thanks so much for an outstanding review, very kind comments, and six-star rating; they are greatly appreciated.

    Have a wonderful and blessed day.

    Blessings...Portia
reply by evesayshi on 23-Jul-2021
    You are very welcome, Portia, and thank you again for sharing this special write...Eve
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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You certainly have all the facts straight. The Creation, the Fall, and then the Salvation. The Lamb of God, Jesus Christ has been sacrificed to save us. We will never forget it.

Ralf


 Comment Written 20-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
    Ralf,

    Thanks so much for your review, rating, and comments; they are appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia

Comment from lyenochka
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It is an amazing plan that we have no idea about but we can trust God that He has all the universe in His Hands. You're right that there are so many things we may never know - especially the battles in the spiritual realms. Great poem!

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Helen,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Have a wonderful and blessed day.

    Hugs...Portia