Creation
God spoke and it was so...36 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Creation", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece.
It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
"Creation", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece.
It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Duchess,
Thanks so much, my sweet and dear friend, for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Hugs...Portia
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Portia,
You're very welcome and certainly deserved both.
God bless and hugs,
the Duchess
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There are two sides to man and we are flawed in many ways, we are complex and scarred by our lives. Faith and belief helps us and gives us hope and I enjoyed your uplifting words here Portia, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
There are two sides to man and we are flawed in many ways, we are complex and scarred by our lives. Faith and belief helps us and gives us hope and I enjoyed your uplifting words here Portia, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Dolly,
Thanks so much for your review, rating, and comments; they are appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem is presented beautifully, Portia. I enjoyed reading it. The image and color scheme are perfect. I like the cursive type font, too. Your rhymes work well and there is good flow. You give readers much to think about in your true words. You are a talented spiritual poet.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
Your poem is presented beautifully, Portia. I enjoyed reading it. The image and color scheme are perfect. I like the cursive type font, too. Your rhymes work well and there is good flow. You give readers much to think about in your true words. You are a talented spiritual poet.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Jan,
Your very kind and supportive reviews always bless me.
Thanks so much for your encouraging comments; they are appreciated.
Have a wonderful day.
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
What a wonderful faith related poem.
I like the division and organization of your stanzas.
You have good strong rhymes and the poem flows smoothly.
I wasn't quite sure if you meant this to be a metered poem or not but it is very close.
Thank you for telling this age old story in your lovely poem
Take care
Katiemae Dead
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
What a wonderful faith related poem.
I like the division and organization of your stanzas.
You have good strong rhymes and the poem flows smoothly.
I wasn't quite sure if you meant this to be a metered poem or not but it is very close.
Thank you for telling this age old story in your lovely poem
Take care
Katiemae Dead
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Katiemae,
Thanks so much for your review, rating, and comments; they are appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, somebody wrote about Adam and Eve yesterday, and Lucifer was already here, although God's foreknowledge knew that Adam a Eve would be proved, but such was His desire to save man, He'd already provided Himself as sacrifice to complete the plan. Beautifully written Portia, blessings Roy
Suggestion: an Angel would fall.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
Oh yes indeed, somebody wrote about Adam and Eve yesterday, and Lucifer was already here, although God's foreknowledge knew that Adam a Eve would be proved, but such was His desire to save man, He'd already provided Himself as sacrifice to complete the plan. Beautifully written Portia, blessings Roy
Suggestion: an Angel would fall.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Roy,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comment; they are greatly appreciated.
Thanks so much for the suggestion.
Have a wonderful and blessed day.
Blessings...Portia
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Most welcome
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A pleasure
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Hello, Portia,
I like Christian poems from writers that take verses from the Word and, employing creative twists, write a beautiful poem.
You do this very well. I often wondered why God would create such a vast universe if he chose Jesus to save mankind on Earth, but now I think He made have made it for His enjoyment as you say.
Excellent and well-written poem, Portia.
Blessings and hugs,
Cindy
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
Hello, Portia,
I like Christian poems from writers that take verses from the Word and, employing creative twists, write a beautiful poem.
You do this very well. I often wondered why God would create such a vast universe if he chose Jesus to save mankind on Earth, but now I think He made have made it for His enjoyment as you say.
Excellent and well-written poem, Portia.
Blessings and hugs,
Cindy
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Cindy,
Your very kind and supportive reviews always bless me.
Thanks so much for your encouraging comments; they are appreciated.
Have a wonderful day.
Hugs...Portia
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You?re welcome, Portia
Afa
Cindy
Comment from dragonpoet
Portia,
This artwork and poem blend well together. I like the Salvation history told in this. It tells of the making of the good and the bad.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
Portia,
This artwork and poem blend well together. I like the Salvation history told in this. It tells of the making of the good and the bad.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Joan,
Thanks so much for your review, rating, and comments; they are appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
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Don't mention it, Portia.
Joan
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a stunning write, appearing inspired and smoothly flowing in easy movement. I felt the grace within the lines and was warmed by it. Thank you to this writer for sharing her inspirational words...
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
In my opinion, a stunning write, appearing inspired and smoothly flowing in easy movement. I felt the grace within the lines and was warmed by it. Thank you to this writer for sharing her inspirational words...
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Eve,
Thanks so much for an outstanding review, very kind comments, and six-star rating; they are greatly appreciated.
Have a wonderful and blessed day.
Blessings...Portia
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You are very welcome, Portia, and thank you again for sharing this special write...Eve
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You certainly have all the facts straight. The Creation, the Fall, and then the Salvation. The Lamb of God, Jesus Christ has been sacrificed to save us. We will never forget it.
Ralf
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
You certainly have all the facts straight. The Creation, the Fall, and then the Salvation. The Lamb of God, Jesus Christ has been sacrificed to save us. We will never forget it.
Ralf
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Ralf,
Thanks so much for your review, rating, and comments; they are appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from lyenochka
It is an amazing plan that we have no idea about but we can trust God that He has all the universe in His Hands. You're right that there are so many things we may never know - especially the battles in the spiritual realms. Great poem!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
It is an amazing plan that we have no idea about but we can trust God that He has all the universe in His Hands. You're right that there are so many things we may never know - especially the battles in the spiritual realms. Great poem!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Helen,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Have a wonderful and blessed day.
Hugs...Portia