Creation
God spoke and it was so...36 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
What a beautiful poem you have written. Rhyming is good, and you have told the story of salvation so clearly. God had a great plan from the beginning, and Satan could not stop it. So thankful that Jesus paid the price for our sins.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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What a beautiful poem you have written. Rhyming is good, and you have told the story of salvation so clearly. God had a great plan from the beginning, and Satan could not stop it. So thankful that Jesus paid the price for our sins.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Anne,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
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You are welcome
Comment from MissMerri
I like how you took an important part of scripture and turned it into a meaningful poem. You add some intriguing ideas that are not spelled out in the Bible. For example, I was caught by these lines... of every creature we may never know... and also.... There are parts of the universe we have never seen... I know that has to be true, of course, but we do not always think about it, so I was glad you included this in your poem. It was a very enjoyable poem and a worthwhile reminder that God is creator and Lord and had a perfect plan in place before He ever started creating. I enjoyed this very much.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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I like how you took an important part of scripture and turned it into a meaningful poem. You add some intriguing ideas that are not spelled out in the Bible. For example, I was caught by these lines... of every creature we may never know... and also.... There are parts of the universe we have never seen... I know that has to be true, of course, but we do not always think about it, so I was glad you included this in your poem. It was a very enjoyable poem and a worthwhile reminder that God is creator and Lord and had a perfect plan in place before He ever started creating. I enjoyed this very much.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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MissMerri,
You are so kind. Thanks so much for this outstanding review and very kind comments; they are appreciated.
I pray you are doing well and staying safe.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a well-crafted poem with great rhyme and rhythm. It also flows well, from creation and the fall, to salvation through Jesus, the great I AM. Good artwork to accompany your words. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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This is a well-crafted poem with great rhyme and rhythm. It also flows well, from creation and the fall, to salvation through Jesus, the great I AM. Good artwork to accompany your words. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Carol,
Thanks so much for your review, rating, and very kind comments; they are appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
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You're welcome. I enjoyed your poem. Carol
Comment from RGstar
Very well written dearest Portia. I read twice, which is unusual , unless I like the poem. I savoured the poetic aura, the rhyme's, and the all important soul of the poem.
Your faith shines through, and you wrote this beautifully, as such the person you are. Your faith is followed up realness, not routine, as many have.
Bravo.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Very well written dearest Portia. I read twice, which is unusual , unless I like the poem. I savoured the poetic aura, the rhyme's, and the all important soul of the poem.
Your faith shines through, and you wrote this beautifully, as such the person you are. Your faith is followed up realness, not routine, as many have.
Bravo.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Roy,
I am blessed by your review, as your thoughts mean a lot. Your encouraging comments are appreciated.
Thanks so much for your support and kindness.
Have a wonderful day, my friend.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Raul1
I like your interesting poem my friend. I hope that nothing happens to Earth, but 16 billions years later the worst is yet to come. Right now we are in clear in this century. Excellent poetry. I like it.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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I like your interesting poem my friend. I hope that nothing happens to Earth, but 16 billions years later the worst is yet to come. Right now we are in clear in this century. Excellent poetry. I like it.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Raul,
Thanks so much for your review, rating, and comments; they are appreciated.
Blessings, my friend...Portia
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You're welcome, my friend! Blessings to you too!
Comment from Janet Foor
God spoke and it was so....that is an amazing realization.
He created the heavens and the earth and you and me. Humbling to say the very least.
Well done Portia.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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God spoke and it was so....that is an amazing realization.
He created the heavens and the earth and you and me. Humbling to say the very least.
Well done Portia.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Janet,
Thanks so much for your review, rating, and comments; they are appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Faith is a fundamental part of life. We're taught from a very young age that leaning on faith in difficult situations helps us to overcome even the most trying and challenging times. I loved this beautifully penned spiritual poem. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Faith is a fundamental part of life. We're taught from a very young age that leaning on faith in difficult situations helps us to overcome even the most trying and challenging times. I loved this beautifully penned spiritual poem. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Seshadri,
Thanks so much for your review, rating, and comments; they are appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from rjuselius
This is a brilliant piece of poetry dear pharp! I thoroughly enjoyed the poem and think it is very effective and rather clever.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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This is a brilliant piece of poetry dear pharp! I thoroughly enjoyed the poem and think it is very effective and rather clever.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Rebekka,
This outstanding review truly blesses me. Thanks so much for your very kind comments, six-star rating, and support.
Have a wonderful and blessed day,
Hugs...Portia
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My pleasure entirely dear friend <3
Comment from Paul McFarland
You have squeezed a great deal of material into a relatively short poem. I think the poem should be longer, or you should do several poems. A good effort and a nice ending.
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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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You have squeezed a great deal of material into a relatively short poem. I think the poem should be longer, or you should do several poems. A good effort and a nice ending.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Paul,
Thanks for your review and comments.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Senyai
Hi Portia,
This is such a beautiful and satisfying poem that is made me know that God indeed has a plan to save mankind from eternal damnation. He made us and every living creature and gave them souls, He wouldn't just throw all away and He didn't. Believing in the Great "I Am" is our saving grace!
Elegantly written in that lovely "Portia Style" :-)
Always,
Senyai
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Hi Portia,
This is such a beautiful and satisfying poem that is made me know that God indeed has a plan to save mankind from eternal damnation. He made us and every living creature and gave them souls, He wouldn't just throw all away and He didn't. Believing in the Great "I Am" is our saving grace!
Elegantly written in that lovely "Portia Style" :-)
Always,
Senyai
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Senjai,
Your very kind and supportive reviews always bless me.
Thanks so much for your encouraging comments; they are appreciated.
Have a wonderful day.
Hugs...Portia
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You are very welcome!
