Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Kindness Sprinkled with Love"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
59 total reviews
Comment from Possummagic
I really enjoyed your poetry. I understand the concept of "keys". They unlock, they liberate, they give us entry, they provide access to... lovely words with depth of meaning, which I really enjoyed.PM
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I really enjoyed your poetry. I understand the concept of "keys". They unlock, they liberate, they give us entry, they provide access to... lovely words with depth of meaning, which I really enjoyed.PM
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
Comment from royowen
Oh if only...I hear people cry, and yet we live in hope, and we know that God will win despite the evil that exists on Earth. I think all Christian look and believe that God is more than able. This is a great revelation, and brings hope where there is none, and faith to endure in that hope. Beautifully written Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Oh if only...I hear people cry, and yet we live in hope, and we know that God will win despite the evil that exists on Earth. I think all Christian look and believe that God is more than able. This is a great revelation, and brings hope where there is none, and faith to endure in that hope. Beautifully written Blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your depth of spirit and understanding. I've for a long time pondered in my heart what love means in reality for there are many shades of love and can ofter be misunderstood. This blocks out their minds because of fear and anguish. A big topic!
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Well done
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written spiritual
Poem. It has a Nice presentation background colour and font. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Well done. Not sure if you realize but there's a lot of extra space underneath your poem. I noticed because I tend to do that a lot myself. Excellent job on your poem.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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This is a beautifully written spiritual
Poem. It has a Nice presentation background colour and font. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Well done. Not sure if you realize but there's a lot of extra space underneath your poem. I noticed because I tend to do that a lot myself. Excellent job on your poem.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your beautiful and informative review, it was really helpful.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Kindness sprinkled with love
by gudbjorg
I agree with you, honest kindness is priceless gift....and it's free. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Kindness sprinkled with love
by gudbjorg
I agree with you, honest kindness is priceless gift....and it's free. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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This is a wonderful review, uplifting and genuine. Thank you for your kindness.
Comment from Mark D. R.
This is a most poignant poem. It shares a good feeling point of view. Your color scheme and illustration are nicely paired with your poem.
IMHO, your presentation value will improve immensely if you increase your font size (and bold the same?) in the advanced editor mode. Not quite sure if the space below your text was intentional or not. It looks a bit weird as is.
Mark
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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This is a most poignant poem. It shares a good feeling point of view. Your color scheme and illustration are nicely paired with your poem.
IMHO, your presentation value will improve immensely if you increase your font size (and bold the same?) in the advanced editor mode. Not quite sure if the space below your text was intentional or not. It looks a bit weird as is.
Mark
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Thank you Mark for such an informative review, I really appreciate
your input on the poem. This Could be a great topic in itself
to write about. The different shads of love.
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I would run with the idea of different shades of love. It will be a great topic for a poem.
Comment from Eternal Muse
I love the spiritual message here. Kindness sprinkled with love will get you far. Love, not hate.
Beautifully written and presented
. Nice imagery and visuals.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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I love the spiritual message here. Kindness sprinkled with love will get you far. Love, not hate.
Beautifully written and presented
. Nice imagery and visuals.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review, "the only way to get rid of the darkness, is to let the light in."
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Kindness sprinkled with love", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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'Kindness sprinkled with love", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you for writing such a beautiful review, it really touched my heart and encouraged my soul. Gb
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Gb, you're more than welcome. You certainly deserved the wonderful review.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess
Comment from Lana Marie
This poem expresses kindness in such a kind manner, as I read it I could feel the calm that it expresses with the carefully yet purposefully chosen words.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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This poem expresses kindness in such a kind manner, as I read it I could feel the calm that it expresses with the carefully yet purposefully chosen words.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I believe that, regardless of how busy we are we can do something to make others happy and feel better.
Comment from Debbie Pope
Your words made me feel good. Your poem is almost like a prayer or blessing. You offer all that we really need in life.
My only suggestion has to do with presentation. There are some stray letters in your descriptive line. And your words need to fill the presentation box. If it were me, I would make the words larger and make them pink. I know this has nothing to do with your writing skills, but, to me, a lovely display would certainly enhance your lovely words.
You have an ease of writing that I like. I hope to read more of your works.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Your words made me feel good. Your poem is almost like a prayer or blessing. You offer all that we really need in life.
My only suggestion has to do with presentation. There are some stray letters in your descriptive line. And your words need to fill the presentation box. If it were me, I would make the words larger and make them pink. I know this has nothing to do with your writing skills, but, to me, a lovely display would certainly enhance your lovely words.
You have an ease of writing that I like. I hope to read more of your works.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review, and thank you again for your good advice on the poem. I really appreciate it. Thank you,
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A very nice poem, Gudbjorg.
-A good topic and effective
imagery and rhyme.
-The poem is definitely
"sprinkled with love."
-The concluding lines are also
very good, and show a
positive attitude.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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-A very nice poem, Gudbjorg.
-A good topic and effective
imagery and rhyme.
-The poem is definitely
"sprinkled with love."
-The concluding lines are also
very good, and show a
positive attitude.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Heartfelt thank you for your excellent review and encouragement, to keep going with my poetry.
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You are very welcome. You should keep going with your poetry!
