Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Kindness Sprinkled with Love"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
59 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written spiritual poem you have penned about great attributes of a Christian person walking in this life. You used very good descriptive and true words with lovely imagery from the art work you chose. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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This is a very beautiful and well written spiritual poem you have penned about great attributes of a Christian person walking in this life. You used very good descriptive and true words with lovely imagery from the art work you chose. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Dear Teri, Thank you for taking the time to read and review one of my other poems. It really encouraged me. I hope you have a lovely week!
Comment from Frances Jean
A delightful little poem of peace and love. Beautifully rhymed with some nice alliteration. There's so much anger and fighting in the world. Why can't people just settle down and be pleasant to each other. Thanks for sharing Franky
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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A delightful little poem of peace and love. Beautifully rhymed with some nice alliteration. There's so much anger and fighting in the world. Why can't people just settle down and be pleasant to each other. Thanks for sharing Franky
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review and input for my poem. Humans aren't perfect, they fail but God's Love never fails.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
I enjoyed this generous poem on love and kindness. Something that I relate to and so appreciate. I did ponder this line:
Keys of kindness sprinkled with love -
Here I understand you may be looking at the alliteration of - K - but the word keys makes the reader visualise a set of keys or a piano. Perhaps - reign, or rain that is associated with sprinkled may sit better. Just food for thought. Thank you for sharing this thoughtful read.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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I enjoyed this generous poem on love and kindness. Something that I relate to and so appreciate. I did ponder this line:
Keys of kindness sprinkled with love -
Here I understand you may be looking at the alliteration of - K - but the word keys makes the reader visualise a set of keys or a piano. Perhaps - reign, or rain that is associated with sprinkled may sit better. Just food for thought. Thank you for sharing this thoughtful read.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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Your comment is very good and thank you so much for taking your time to review my poem. Always open for improvement and change for the better.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very uplifting message here. It's interesting how lines of poetry come to us sometime. This has happened to me on a number of occasions - sometimes when I'm not even writing.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Very uplifting message here. It's interesting how lines of poetry come to us sometime. This has happened to me on a number of occasions - sometimes when I'm not even writing.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Thank you for these words of encouragement, It is nothing but supernatural. l and in reality often mnteind-blowing.
Comment from pookietoo
A very positive poem. Pleasantness. not anger and strife. Wonderful words. Have a wonderful day. Thanks for the wonderful poem. Keys of kindness sprinkled with love. Love these words
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2021
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A very positive poem. Pleasantness. not anger and strife. Wonderful words. Have a wonderful day. Thanks for the wonderful poem. Keys of kindness sprinkled with love. Love these words
Comment Written 17-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your beautiful and honest review, it was was a real joy reading knowing that it did someone good.
With love and appreciation,
Gb
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You are welcome.
Comment from Pantygynt
I was initially attracted by your opening phrase, 'Keys of kindness' - I am a sucker for alliteration, particularly on the harder sounds as here. The pair of couplets too were a neat form to use in a short poem such as this.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2021
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I was initially attracted by your opening phrase, 'Keys of kindness' - I am a sucker for alliteration, particularly on the harder sounds as here. The pair of couplets too were a neat form to use in a short poem such as this.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for taking the time to give me such a wonderful reaction and honest review.
With love and appreciation,
Gb
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem,Kindness Sprinkled withLove, has a nice rhyme and reminds the readers that we can be a positive factor where we go with an emphasis on helping others and being there.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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This poem,Kindness Sprinkled withLove, has a nice rhyme and reminds the readers that we can be a positive factor where we go with an emphasis on helping others and being there.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you so for your good and honest review, we all need have that quality in our lives.
With appreciation
Gb
Comment from writer723
I found your poem to be beautiful and honest. We all need to sow seeds of love, compassion, and kindness. There just isn't enough of it in this world. Your words echo this sentiment poignantly. I especially liked the line about 'hope and peace filling one's life'. I wish this for everyone. Such a lovely, sentimental poem you've created.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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I found your poem to be beautiful and honest. We all need to sow seeds of love, compassion, and kindness. There just isn't enough of it in this world. Your words echo this sentiment poignantly. I especially liked the line about 'hope and peace filling one's life'. I wish this for everyone. Such a lovely, sentimental poem you've created.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your beautiful review. Love and kindness will never go out of style. They really are wondrous things.
Comment from ESOSTINE
I totally agree with your poem, dear GUDBJORG. Genuine kindness and love come from Above, and in it comes with peace of mind and hope, and dispels anger and strife. Quite a lot of wisdom is so short a poem. Great work. Well done!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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I totally agree with your poem, dear GUDBJORG. Genuine kindness and love come from Above, and in it comes with peace of mind and hope, and dispels anger and strife. Quite a lot of wisdom is so short a poem. Great work. Well done!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review. I feel it is a much needed topic amongst people in today?s society, where anger and strife are prevalent and hate is taking its toll. It makes me so thankful for the love and kindness others share with me.
Comment from Cathy M
What a lovely poem about kindness and losing the strife you feel in life. It is a simple poem yet there are so many levels it reaches out with the words you chose. kindness sprinkled with love, hope and peace... etc. Nice job.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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What a lovely poem about kindness and losing the strife you feel in life. It is a simple poem yet there are so many levels it reaches out with the words you chose. kindness sprinkled with love, hope and peace... etc. Nice job.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your beautiful review. When the world seems dark and cold, love and kindness will never go out of style. They really are wondrous things.
