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Midst Of A Storm

A poem

48 total reviews 
Comment from Sally Law
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A wonderful poetry offering with a story inside the storm. A well-crafted offering today from your talented hand. Sending you my best and blessings always,
Sally :))

 Comment Written 17-May-2021


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Comment from Erika Seshadri
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This is very nice. Interesting and well-written. I like how it slowly builds the drama throughout and ends in big storm. Wonderful imagery:

Here comes the wind with just a whispering.
The waters bubble gently like skin blistering.

Cheers!

 Comment Written 17-May-2021


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Comment from Sharon Davis
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Excellent. This poem's message is conveyed effectively. It creates a sensory symphony that carries the reader through a storm from its beginning to its end. The poem's carefully chosen words create vivid imagery. Well done.

 Comment Written 17-May-2021


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Comment from jaded831
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You captured the power of Mother Nature. She has no intent to destroy, it is what it is, although she doesn't feel anger her power is relentless. Your rhymes added a lightness. Making your poem exceptional.

 Comment Written 17-May-2021


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Comment from Wendy G
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This is a lovely piece of writing. You have captured the atmosphere building up very well, that eerie silence before the impact of the storm. Very well written.

 Comment Written 17-May-2021


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Comment from Spangle
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This poem with rhyming couplets offers very strong imagery to be experienced through the senses such as: Waves rolling into fizzing foam.
(It would be easier to read with a blank space between verses...a kindness to readers with weak eyes.)

 Comment Written 16-May-2021


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Comment from amahra
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I really like the imagery of the anatomy of a single storm. It paints a dim of nature at its worst yet you do not curse the storm...hat is, you don't lay blame to the storm. Great poem.

 Comment Written 16-May-2021


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Comment from harmony13
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The poem was extremely thought provoking. The words are descriptive,
clear, interesting and creative. I pondered on the theme of this poem
and agree with the author's last line. For me - Nature is Natural. The poem flows and connects well.

 Comment Written 16-May-2021


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Comment from ESOSTINE
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I found the poem very rich in imagery, creating an atmosphere of man's lack of control over natural occurrences. Hope I got the message. Well written! Thanks for sharing your inspiration dear POETICXCAPE.

 Comment Written 16-May-2021


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Comment from Senyai
Exceptional
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Hi Poeticxscape,

Your poem is uniquely and finely crafted! I enjoyed your words conveying the fact the nature cannot be held accountable for her wrath.
Very nuanced in places and then very forthright in others. Such a pleasant mix that worked well throughout.

Excellent!
Best wishes,
Senyai

 Comment Written 16-May-2021


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