May I Take Your Order?
fast food is evil4 total reviews
Comment from Bekah Heart
I found your poem to be very thought provoking and that it also has such great flow! (easy to read and follow) You are so creative -- a true artist. Thanks for your entry!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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I found your poem to be very thought provoking and that it also has such great flow! (easy to read and follow) You are so creative -- a true artist. Thanks for your entry!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much! I appreciate it!!
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Of course!
Comment from Lana Marie
I like the humor in your poem. I read it out loud to my husband and it made him laugh.
It's true if you only eat what those places have to offer, you'll be paying a hefty price!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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I like the humor in your poem. I read it out loud to my husband and it made him laugh.
It's true if you only eat what those places have to offer, you'll be paying a hefty price!
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Thank you!!!
Comment from keimosobie
kind of takes the fun out of eating fast food.
I ordered a salad. so what if it had fried chicken and bacon in
it. it was green. pretty much. I like the creativity.
McWendyKing very original. You can tell you put some
thought into this. It should do well. good luck.
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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kind of takes the fun out of eating fast food.
I ordered a salad. so what if it had fried chicken and bacon in
it. it was green. pretty much. I like the creativity.
McWendyKing very original. You can tell you put some
thought into this. It should do well. good luck.
Comment Written 15-May-2021
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Yeah, sorry. It does ruin it a bit, doesn't it?
Thanks so much for taking time to read and review my work! I appreciate it.
Comment from Anne Johnston
I love your take on this for the contest. You have managed to include all those items that are not good for us. And I love the way you ended it.
"That will be an $80,000 hospital bill.
Please pull up to the first window sill."
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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I love your take on this for the contest. You have managed to include all those items that are not good for us. And I love the way you ended it.
"That will be an $80,000 hospital bill.
Please pull up to the first window sill."
Comment Written 15-May-2021
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Thank you Anne! I appreciate the read and review.
Have a lovely Sunday.
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You are welcome
