Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Football Chapter 17 part 1"A mother faces life's struggles.
28 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Like the jogging in your story. I also like to watch track so its right up my alley. I'm glad that you're holding the story to your own thoughts and not the annoying teacher Mr. Frost.
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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Like the jogging in your story. I also like to watch track so its right up my alley. I'm glad that you're holding the story to your own thoughts and not the annoying teacher Mr. Frost.
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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Thank you for catching up with the posts. I appreciate it and am sorry you are reading when no moneys attached.
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I'm following your story.....catch up time.
Comment from Sanku
You are a brilliant writer and because of the fluidity of the words flowing from your hands ,I could read from Chapter 28 onwards in one go.
I was down with our corona virus
Katherine's encounter with the towel -clad Gabriel, her unusual embarrassment , and the touching explanation - all were beautifully portrayed. The games ,coaching of the girls and finally the shocking incident of an abused girl.. I have enjoyed reading this ....
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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You are a brilliant writer and because of the fluidity of the words flowing from your hands ,I could read from Chapter 28 onwards in one go.
I was down with our corona virus
Katherine's encounter with the towel -clad Gabriel, her unusual embarrassment , and the touching explanation - all were beautifully portrayed. The games ,coaching of the girls and finally the shocking incident of an abused girl.. I have enjoyed reading this ....
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This is another great installment. You moved the story along nicely and it was an interesting read from beginning to end. The picture definitely matches the story. There is no room for improvement.
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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This is another great installment. You moved the story along nicely and it was an interesting read from beginning to end. The picture definitely matches the story. There is no room for improvement.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from tfawcus
I like the way you use dialogue so naturally to bring out the various anxieties and concerns of your characters and to have them talk things out, one with the other. Good chapter.
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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I like the way you use dialogue so naturally to bring out the various anxieties and concerns of your characters and to have them talk things out, one with the other. Good chapter.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Glad to see them partnering nicely on a routine and off-school schedule. The easiest way get married and stop any nonsense rumors. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Glad to see them partnering nicely on a routine and off-school schedule. The easiest way get married and stop any nonsense rumors. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
Things are warming up a bit. Katherine is starting to admit to herself she really likes this man. I'm wondering what Frost is hoping to so with all the pictures he is have someone snap of the two of them.
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Things are warming up a bit. Katherine is starting to admit to herself she really likes this man. I'm wondering what Frost is hoping to so with all the pictures he is have someone snap of the two of them.
Comment Written 11-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from DentedSyke
This is eerie! I was a high school math teacher here in Texas, and I also coached cross country. Damned small world, Barbara.
ANYWAY...
I'm not much on romance pieces, but this one was good. You kept the story varied and interesting; the action moved right along. I can see why you're a published author. Nice work with the characters, by the way. Distinctive personalities. Keep writing!
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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This is eerie! I was a high school math teacher here in Texas, and I also coached cross country. Damned small world, Barbara.
ANYWAY...
I'm not much on romance pieces, but this one was good. You kept the story varied and interesting; the action moved right along. I can see why you're a published author. Nice work with the characters, by the way. Distinctive personalities. Keep writing!
Comment Written 11-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
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Comment from Dilettante junior
Dear Barbara,
Great job with your chapter! Thanks for adding a lil of the last bits to catch up. This is a fine chapter. The plot, the setting, the dialogues, the vision you have are all incorporated well within. The conversation fits right in too.
I would like to read more.
Well done.
DJ
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Dear Barbara,
Great job with your chapter! Thanks for adding a lil of the last bits to catch up. This is a fine chapter. The plot, the setting, the dialogues, the vision you have are all incorporated well within. The conversation fits right in too.
I would like to read more.
Well done.
DJ
Comment Written 11-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear barbara, I am so glad that you have these two major protagonist being able to be upfront and discuss what's on their mind. Because I think communication right from the beginning certainly helps any relationship, particularly, if this one is headed in the direction that the romantic in me wishes.
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Dear barbara, I am so glad that you have these two major protagonist being able to be upfront and discuss what's on their mind. Because I think communication right from the beginning certainly helps any relationship, particularly, if this one is headed in the direction that the romantic in me wishes.
Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from estory
A nice realistic dialogue between Katherine and Gabriel. We feel the tentativeness of their dance around each other, but towards the end, she admits she would miss him too, along with the boys. It seems they are creating this feeling of having to watch appearances to cover their own trepidations in getting closer together. But they are coming together. estory
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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A nice realistic dialogue between Katherine and Gabriel. We feel the tentativeness of their dance around each other, but towards the end, she admits she would miss him too, along with the boys. It seems they are creating this feeling of having to watch appearances to cover their own trepidations in getting closer together. But they are coming together. estory
Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
