Unknown Gates
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4 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This image is so terrifying: "
He dresses black into the night blend unseen, hunting every bend for red drink, sucks blood, sinks teeth trend into firmly stopping hunger." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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This image is so terrifying: "
He dresses black into the night blend unseen, hunting every bend for red drink, sucks blood, sinks teeth trend into firmly stopping hunger." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Glad certain aspects detailed in this write were appealing to your interests, thanking you for generous rate and warm thoughts.
Comment from oliver818
This is an interesting poem, I enjoyed reading it. The imagery is spooky but fun. I particularly enjoyed the last paragraph. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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This is an interesting poem, I enjoyed reading it. The imagery is spooky but fun. I particularly enjoyed the last paragraph. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 07-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thanking you for that generous rate, and your welcomed comment.
Comment from DentedSyke
I really enjoyed the disjointed style of writing you employ. It works. However, it does make it difficult to understand what you want to convey. Perhaps it's just my prejudice against this style, but I feel like you could make your story clearer with a more structured approach. Still, a fine piece.
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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I really enjoyed the disjointed style of writing you employ. It works. However, it does make it difficult to understand what you want to convey. Perhaps it's just my prejudice against this style, but I feel like you could make your story clearer with a more structured approach. Still, a fine piece.
Comment Written 07-May-2021
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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No. I have my struggles writing, appreciating your shout and generous rate.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Jessica Weiss
Ok super creepy. And good image to stick with it. Ooof seriously gives me the heebee-jeebees. I don't like reading it. But that's a good thing, that means it's effective writing. Five stars and probably better for a horror fan.
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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Ok super creepy. And good image to stick with it. Ooof seriously gives me the heebee-jeebees. I don't like reading it. But that's a good thing, that means it's effective writing. Five stars and probably better for a horror fan.
Comment Written 07-May-2021
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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Glad certain aspects prevailing this write were found interesting, thanking you for generous rate plus touching thoughts.