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A Book of Hope and Faith

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Comment from Earl Corp
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Using Romeo and Juliet, Samson and Delilah, and Adam and Eve as role models for romance isn't good due to the way all three couples ended up. Very nice job.

 Comment Written 04-May-2021


reply by the author on 06-May-2021
    Thanks again for your time and review Earl.
    And, always much appreciated!
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Alexandra Bane
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Beautifully written, nice rhythm, the rhetoricals make it engaging and thought provoking. A clever way to taking clichés and making them more than they are normally perceived to be.

 Comment Written 04-May-2021


reply by the author on 06-May-2021
    But thank you for that and you're the only one that seemed to understand that that was the way it was intentionally written but you're also the only one to give it less than six stars.
    Doctor Ricky1024