Comment from Brenda Henderson

Excellent

Did Elwood P. Dowd's friend Harvey have progeny or is Lori a 7ft tall female polka? I guess we'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out. This is a very pleasant read. I think Jimmy Stewart would've been pleased!

 Comment Written 22-May-2021

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reply by the author on 22-May-2021

Thanks, Brenda.

reply by Brenda Henderson on 22-May-2021

You're Welcome!

Comment from Leann DS

Excellent

Oh darn. I read these out of order. Your imagination is something else! How do you come up with this crazy stuff?! Love it! Thank you for sharing. Have a great night!

 Comment Written 21-May-2021

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reply by the author on 21-May-2021

Thanks, Leann, for reviewing these scenes.

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

I'm beginning to think Fox's Pooka is playing tricks on him by becoming Lori Oppenheimer. Thankl God this isn't a Ned and Pons script I can just imagine Ned dealing with a Pooka. nice twist to the story.

 Comment Written 06-May-2021

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reply by the author on 06-May-2021

Thanks, Earl.

Comment from Jerome Goldberg

Excellent

Bill - This is an amusing episode with some phun word play. It reminds me of an old friend named Harvey. But he was only six feet tall. Stay well - Jerry

 Comment Written 05-May-2021

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reply by the author on 05-May-2021

Thanks, Jerry.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I take it that his pooka has shape shifted. I've heard they can do that. Now his pooka is masquerading as his friend Lori. I don't think I want a pooka. They apparently try to drive you crazy. I'm enjoying your fun story.

 Comment Written 04-May-2021

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reply by the author on 04-May-2021

Thank you, Beth. My pooka is fairly docile.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Shades of "Harvey" with the pooka. Elwood was fond of that rabbit. (I played Veta in a community theatre version of "Harvey.") Why is is significant that Lori is seven feet tall? Is she actually the pooka? Fox is an intriguing name because of Fox in the X-Files. This Fox is also seeking the truth about what happened to his pooka. Good luck to him. I want to believe. judi

 Comment Written 04-May-2021

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reply by the author on 04-May-2021

I?ll need to introduce more characters to get somewhere.

reply by judiverse on 04-May-2021

You'll have to have that rabbit! judi

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Whatever dude is smoking, I do not want any. I do not even want to accidently inhale any of it. This stuff sounds deadly. I will happily pass on it. Somebody is tripping really hard. Is it you?

 Comment Written 04-May-2021

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reply by the author on 04-May-2021

Is someone speaking?

Comment from Suzanna Ray

Excellent

Dear Bill, I think Fox Fine and his friends is finally going to be story. (smile)
Your last four words have the potential to go in 50 different directions. I do hope your muse does not desert you, in the middle of this muddle.

 Comment Written 04-May-2021

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reply by the author on 04-May-2021

Thanks, Suzanna. Me too.

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This is an interesting start to a script, being based on misunderstandings, mixing up people, and improbable events. I expect it to progress amusingly and am looking forward to several good reads.

 Comment Written 04-May-2021

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reply by the author on 04-May-2021

Thanks, Katherine. I hope it only takes a year. : )

reply by Katherine M. (k-11) on 04-May-2021

Why do you think it might take longer?

reply by the author on 04-May-2021

JK

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Aha! Lori is the pooka, or at least A pooka. That's why she disappeared. It's a wonder someone didn't call the men in white coats to get Fox. Interesting to see how this plays out.

 Comment Written 04-May-2021

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reply by the author on 04-May-2021

I?m thinking Fox gets a sore neck.