Becomes Mercy
a 5-7-511 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Mystery writer of your 5-7-5 Becomes Mercy
is filled with gloom of death, which becomes merciful and. is better than being tortured .
Best to you in this contest.
Gert
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Hello Mystery writer of your 5-7-5 Becomes Mercy
is filled with gloom of death, which becomes merciful and. is better than being tortured .
Best to you in this contest.
Gert
Comment Written 30-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Gert
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line. The color scheme works well as does the art choice. Your message is clear too even if it is scary. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line. The color scheme works well as does the art choice. Your message is clear too even if it is scary. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Jan
Comment from Patty Palmer
This poem is deep. Just a handful of words but you allow the reader to take the meaning of it in their own way. The artwork is unique and it enhances your poem very well. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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This poem is deep. Just a handful of words but you allow the reader to take the meaning of it in their own way. The artwork is unique and it enhances your poem very well. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Patty
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. It's sad. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. Good luck.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Hello, anonymous,
Good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. It's sad. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. Good luck.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thanks, GBR
Comment from harmony13
I found the author's words sad, thought provoking and creative. I
thought about the the words the author wrote and how I find the outcome
sad. The artwork is perfect and compliments both the theme and
words of this poem. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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I found the author's words sad, thought provoking and creative. I
thought about the the words the author wrote and how I find the outcome
sad. The artwork is perfect and compliments both the theme and
words of this poem. Have a great day!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Harmony
Comment from Begin Again
Whether a real prison or one of our own making, finding relief from escaping the chains of misery one might find peace in death. Wishing you the best. Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Whether a real prison or one of our own making, finding relief from escaping the chains of misery one might find peace in death. Wishing you the best. Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Carol
Comment from kahpot
Very well said, though if imprisoned and death is your sentence and is deserved, then mercy is not deserved, what a wonderful read, making the mind active, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Very well said, though if imprisoned and death is your sentence and is deserved, then mercy is not deserved, what a wonderful read, making the mind active, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you, kahpot
Comment from Dilettante junior
Nice job with your prompt. You got the syllables right. The artwork looks great. It is true they say that staying is quite a torture that many prefer an escape from it. Good luck,
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Nice job with your prompt. You got the syllables right. The artwork looks great. It is true they say that staying is quite a torture that many prefer an escape from it. Good luck,
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Dj
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are sad and poignant words and death is a relief for the sufferer of pain and is indeed a mercy in the end, sad but true words here, an honest write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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These are sad and poignant words and death is a relief for the sufferer of pain and is indeed a mercy in the end, sad but true words here, an honest write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from Wendy G
A very sad 5-7-5, but unfortunately that is the reality for many, maybe because of severe persecution or severe and painful illness, when death becomes a mercy. Best wishes for your entry.
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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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A very sad 5-7-5, but unfortunately that is the reality for many, maybe because of severe persecution or severe and painful illness, when death becomes a mercy. Best wishes for your entry.
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Wendy
