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I wish

Life in plastic

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Comment from writer723
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I enjoyed reading your story. You gave a good description of what it would be like to switch places with someone else. I found your tale entertaining and witty, with good humor. It sounds like a nice lifestyle. Great job!

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2021

Comment from royowen
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I think at some stage in our lives we at least wonder what it would be like to be someone, good looking, talented and of course, rich. You've chosen a worthy in in Jennifer Lopez, and why not? Beautifully written, an excellent entry in this contest, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2021

Comment from Leann DS
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This was a fun story and a great And original take on the contest. I enjoyed reading it and I like your message. thank you for writing. Well done. Hugs and blessings to you.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2021

Comment from Bonnie Seach
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This is a quick and easy read. It leaves a smile on my face and I can picture the fabulous Jennifer Lopez smiling too if she gets to read it. The modern style is pleasing. It is not laborious. It is light and breezy. Thank you

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2021

Comment from Jill McCauslin
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This was definitely fun. I enjoyed it a lot. I didn't realize until the end that poor Jennifer Lopez ended up in your body! She didn't make a wish but it still happened. I liked the last paragraph. I kept expecting a servant to show up. Maybe there should have been someone that you had to interact with. Great job! Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2021

Comment from Judy Lawless
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This is a fun piece of fiction. I couldn't even imagine what it would be like to be a star, but I'm sure I wouldn't want to step outside the gates of that home. There would always be someone looking to find your secrets. ??? Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2021

Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
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Very creative and cute! I liked your choice of who you would like to be and wallah!!! There you were. What a fun read! Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2021

Comment from Bill Schott
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This is a fun story and I'm certain that many wish to be J-Lo. I only see one nagging tense shift right off the get-go that could use an edit.

'The next morning...' nails down the past tense point of view. To bring the beginning paragraph, which is in the present tense, to that tense as well.

I (was) so tired of working hard. What (was) my reward for working and giving my one hundred and ten percent? (Was) I making more than the average Jo? (Did) I (have) respect and credibility? Etcetera...


 Comment Written 21-Apr-2021

Comment from mobileliz
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Nice story, well written. Good buildup getting to the new ID. Knew what she wanted and actively went after it. She also acknowledged that it wouldn't last by saying "before the offer expires." Good job.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2021

Comment from Karen Estep
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Fun piece! I feel you really enjoyed writing this and don't we all wish at times we could yell something before bed and wake up in a different world? Good luck in the contest, my friend!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2021