For you, Ace ...
I wrote this for my friend who had a violent untimely death!13 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is such a sad and horrible thing to happen to this person. How can people be so evil and mean? It blows my mind. You did a really great job writing this from your heart. I am so sorry for your loss and all that loved him. I believe he will pray for what he has done. May God bless you and comfort you all in knowing that God sees and hears all things! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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This is such a sad and horrible thing to happen to this person. How can people be so evil and mean? It blows my mind. You did a really great job writing this from your heart. I am so sorry for your loss and all that loved him. I believe he will pray for what he has done. May God bless you and comfort you all in knowing that God sees and hears all things! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Yes thank you for your comforting words Teri, they do help! I wrote a second poem called the madness of Evil speaking about how could they do such a thing!
God bless;-)
Comment from royowen
I can't fathom for the life of me, why anybody murders someone else in such a brutal way as this, even in my days as a young man I never knew anyone like that. Well written Melodie, good going in your unique style, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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I can't fathom for the life of me, why anybody murders someone else in such a brutal way as this, even in my days as a young man I never knew anyone like that. Well written Melodie, good going in your unique style, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your kind worries and your words of comfort, Roy. Read my second one called the Madness of Evil ... Speaking on how could someone do that?
What is my unique way? Lol, I've wondered since you told me that a bit ago!
God bless;-)
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Good job
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
My sincere condolences, MM, on the loss of your beloved friend, Ace. Your poem is well-written as a partial tribute to his short life and how he made those around him feel special. Your notes are informative, too. I believe those involved will be brought to justice here on Earth and before God. Take care and know that I am praying for you.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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My sincere condolences, MM, on the loss of your beloved friend, Ace. Your poem is well-written as a partial tribute to his short life and how he made those around him feel special. Your notes are informative, too. I believe those involved will be brought to justice here on Earth and before God. Take care and know that I am praying for you.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you dear one for your sweet condolences and concern and prayers for justice!
May God bless you and your family;-)
Comment from Begin Again
My heartfelt prayers and condolences go out to you and your friends. What a horrific thing to happen to your friend. You posted a beautiful tribute and I pray you find the perpetrators and they are punished. It won't bring your friend back but at least they will be punished. Thoughts and prayers - Carol
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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My heartfelt prayers and condolences go out to you and your friends. What a horrific thing to happen to your friend. You posted a beautiful tribute and I pray you find the perpetrators and they are punished. It won't bring your friend back but at least they will be punished. Thoughts and prayers - Carol
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your kind words of condolence and especially your prayers!
Thank you for my eXcellent review and rating and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment from Wendy G
Oh my goodness. What trauma for you all. What a terrible horrific event. How some humans can beat and kill with such violence is impossible for me to understand. i will pray that justice will be done, and the perpetrators found. Thank you for sharing. I hope you have some supportive friends to care for you through this awful time.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Oh my goodness. What trauma for you all. What a terrible horrific event. How some humans can beat and kill with such violence is impossible for me to understand. i will pray that justice will be done, and the perpetrators found. Thank you for sharing. I hope you have some supportive friends to care for you through this awful time.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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My guy is my support and he's my rock, thank you for your concern. We all appreciate your prayers that all involved in this heinous crime be brought to justice in Jesus name!
Thank you so much and may God bless you and your family;-)
Thanxxx for my review and rating!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Violence is never to be condoned. Extreme violence is inexcusible.
The world is too full now of hatred and evil. I don't see where we are going in the future, but it doesn't look good.
J will pra for you and your friend.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Violence is never to be condoned. Extreme violence is inexcusible.
The world is too full now of hatred and evil. I don't see where we are going in the future, but it doesn't look good.
J will pra for you and your friend.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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God bless you and thank you so very much!
Comment from DonandVicki
A very moving tribute to your friend, What a horrific death. I will pray that justice is served to those cowards that could do this to another human being. Don.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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A very moving tribute to your friend, What a horrific death. I will pray that justice is served to those cowards that could do this to another human being. Don.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your kind words and for my review and rating!
God bless you;-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness this is so terrible Michelle, I am glad they have a suspect for this awful crime. I don't think I have ever had one of my neighbours murdered, so this must be quite a shock to you, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Oh my goodness this is so terrible Michelle, I am glad they have a suspect for this awful crime. I don't think I have ever had one of my neighbours murdered, so this must be quite a shock to you, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Yes it is still a shock even after a week. His camper is still there and I see it from my window. It's an unsettling feeling bc we know there were others involved regardless of who actually committed the actual act. This is the first time I've ever been this close to anything like this. This is only for TV right? Smh
I haven't slept maybe 5 hours since last Saturday when he was found and I'm exhausted but I can't turn my mind off plus I have ADHD as well, so it's quite interesting in my brain these days.
Thank you for my review sweetheart and rating!
God bless;-)
Comment from Earthspoet
Melodie, So Sorry To Hear This. God Be With You And Yours Always
Our Father who art in Heaven
Hallowed Be Thy Name
Thy Kindom Come
Thy will Be Done
On Earth As It Is In Heaven.
Lord Father God Bring
Them To Justice
For No One Should Suffer This Barbaric Act Or leave This World Like That
Or See What You Did
My Father Send Down You Hand Of Judgement
They will not Rest For the Rest OF Their Lives They Shall See Ace's Face They Shall Not Be Able To Sleep
They Shall Walk In To The Station And Hand Themselves In
Do This, in Jesus's Name
I Have Prayed
Amen
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Melodie, So Sorry To Hear This. God Be With You And Yours Always
Our Father who art in Heaven
Hallowed Be Thy Name
Thy Kindom Come
Thy will Be Done
On Earth As It Is In Heaven.
Lord Father God Bring
Them To Justice
For No One Should Suffer This Barbaric Act Or leave This World Like That
Or See What You Did
My Father Send Down You Hand Of Judgement
They will not Rest For the Rest OF Their Lives They Shall See Ace's Face They Shall Not Be Able To Sleep
They Shall Walk In To The Station And Hand Themselves In
Do This, in Jesus's Name
I Have Prayed
Amen
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Agreed and I stand in agreement with you in Jesus name! Thank you so much we need all the prayers we can get for his justice!
Thank you for the six STARS and my kind review!
Many blessings to you and your family;-)
Comment from Carlos' girl
Hey.. small grammatical correction.
Para 4 :
I'm very surprised that's they...
s/b that they.
Excellent work melodies. I know you put a great deal of work into this. Your work has a freeverse feel to it which I love
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Hey.. small grammatical correction.
Para 4 :
I'm very surprised that's they...
s/b that they.
Excellent work melodies. I know you put a great deal of work into this. Your work has a freeverse feel to it which I love
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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It just flows out of me when I write poetry and I rarely have to tweak it much! It's truly a gift that I'm tremendously grateful for!
Thanxxx for my review and reacting;-) May God bless you and your family;-)
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