The Wedding Ring
Lost and Found5 total reviews
Comment from Jay Squires
There is something haunting about this poem, CG. The reader, this reader, wonders if the wedding ring was lost, or intentionally misplaced, and her lover--is it her love, or her lover--waits for her under the sea? That said, it is very well done, and I hope it does well in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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There is something haunting about this poem, CG. The reader, this reader, wonders if the wedding ring was lost, or intentionally misplaced, and her lover--is it her love, or her lover--waits for her under the sea? That said, it is very well done, and I hope it does well in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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I agree. It is haunting. I appreciate your review thanks jay
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Interesting haiku. Sounds intriguing to me. Maybe if you find something, you may lose something else to balance it out. Life is full of compromises. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Interesting haiku. Sounds intriguing to me. Maybe if you find something, you may lose something else to balance it out. Life is full of compromises. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thanks and glad you read it
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written 5-7-5 poem. Nice overall
Presentation. Beautiful
Photo selection to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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This is a nicely written 5-7-5 poem. Nice overall
Presentation. Beautiful
Photo selection to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Thank you joanne. Hope you are well
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you tell a whole story with just this brief 5-7-5. The wedding ring is lost perhaps due to some tragedy. On either side of eternity the separated lovers await one another. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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I like how you tell a whole story with just this brief 5-7-5. The wedding ring is lost perhaps due to some tragedy. On either side of eternity the separated lovers await one another. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Thank you love
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
What an interesting poem and accompanying artwork! You caused my mind to conjure up an entire story about a man who tries to save his wife from drowning in the ocean after a boating accident - or maybe she fell or jumped off a cruise ship and he jumped in to try and save her. And he is unable to save her and also loses his wedding ring in the process!
Great job!
Thank you for sharing,
Susan
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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What an interesting poem and accompanying artwork! You caused my mind to conjure up an entire story about a man who tries to save his wife from drowning in the ocean after a boating accident - or maybe she fell or jumped off a cruise ship and he jumped in to try and save her. And he is unable to save her and also loses his wedding ring in the process!
Great job!
Thank you for sharing,
Susan
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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wonderful review! So appreciate you seeing the possibilities. It has a romantic quality for sure with the husband and her under the sea and lost wedding ring
