Day Deepens Into Dusk
Unrhymed Tercet26 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Brilliant!
It absolutely seems like certain scenes we come upon are conjured by the muse to make us take up our quill and capture it in words!
Wow.
I'm learning more than ever was a master of poetry you are!
Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Brilliant!
It absolutely seems like certain scenes we come upon are conjured by the muse to make us take up our quill and capture it in words!
Wow.
I'm learning more than ever was a master of poetry you are!
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Thank you for digging my old poems. God bless you and your family.
Love,
Marival
Love and hugs
Marival
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It was a delightful
gift of an afternoon
I gave myself!
Hugs!
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello Gypsy Blue Rose: I thank you for sharing your witty ditty here. You told a complete long story here with only three lines and fifteen words. This is clever. God bless you, my friend. cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Hello Gypsy Blue Rose: I thank you for sharing your witty ditty here. You told a complete long story here with only three lines and fifteen words. This is clever. God bless you, my friend. cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark Schardine
day deepens into dusk
as crows feathers shine with last light --
waiting for haiku poet
The haiku poet needs to find the right moment, exactly the time when the light seen leads to words imagined but not yet expressed.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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day deepens into dusk
as crows feathers shine with last light --
waiting for haiku poet
The haiku poet needs to find the right moment, exactly the time when the light seen leads to words imagined but not yet expressed.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugsp
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
The visuals seem to heighten the impact of the words. It is good to know that inspiration can be drawn from the much-malighned crows too! A very well written short poem indeed. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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The visuals seem to heighten the impact of the words. It is good to know that inspiration can be drawn from the much-malighned crows too! A very well written short poem indeed. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
A beautiful poem and stunning artwork to go with it! I also love the presentation with the poem in the middle of the art. Sounds like the crows are waiting for you! :) Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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A beautiful poem and stunning artwork to go with it! I also love the presentation with the poem in the middle of the art. Sounds like the crows are waiting for you! :) Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from padumachitta
hey There
well, this was a surprise at the end. And I did laugh.
I do love corvids(the name for the family of crws and such)...and or course...who knows...maybe one did wait..
be safe my friend,
pc
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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hey There
well, this was a surprise at the end. And I did laugh.
I do love corvids(the name for the family of crws and such)...and or course...who knows...maybe one did wait..
be safe my friend,
pc
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
The visuals that accompany this poem are quite something. They are both spooky and convoluted. This matches the mood of the actual poem. I particularly liked the line:
feathers shine with last light
this can't be seen so it is asking for the comprehension and belief of the 'blind' reader.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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The visuals that accompany this poem are quite something. They are both spooky and convoluted. This matches the mood of the actual poem. I particularly liked the line:
feathers shine with last light
this can't be seen so it is asking for the comprehension and belief of the 'blind' reader.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
Love the artwork!! It is so perfect for your poem. And your poem reminds me of our neighborhood crows who love to have parties in our pecan trees and invite ALL of their friends until the noise is, well, very noisy! I especially love you second line about the crow's feathers shining with the last light - very poetic imagery.
Thank you for sharing@
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Love the artwork!! It is so perfect for your poem. And your poem reminds me of our neighborhood crows who love to have parties in our pecan trees and invite ALL of their friends until the noise is, well, very noisy! I especially love you second line about the crow's feathers shining with the last light - very poetic imagery.
Thank you for sharing@
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Vanna1
Great presentation. Good visuals, I could visualize the moment. This seems like a fun write. The notes are good as well. Thanks for the inspiration. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Great presentation. Good visuals, I could visualize the moment. This seems like a fun write. The notes are good as well. Thanks for the inspiration. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Boogienights
This is terrific. It sets a scene and puts you there at the end of day. I can see it in my minds eye, especially the crow, which lends a slightly ominous tone to the write. Thank you for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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This is terrific. It sets a scene and puts you there at the end of day. I can see it in my minds eye, especially the crow, which lends a slightly ominous tone to the write. Thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
