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Button and the Carrot Thief

A smart little puppy!

3 total reviews 
Comment from Karen Estep
Excellent
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I really enjoyed your poem, the graphic and the color of the background. I did have to read twice paragraph five to distinguish who "he" was at first, but I felt the rest of the poem flowed very well! Good luck!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
    Thanks, Karen! I wrote this as a short story several years ago and wondered if i could turn it into a poem. It wasn't easy. lol
    I appreciate your feedback and kind comment!
Comment from cleo85
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is a lovely poem!
It would be perfect for a book for small children.
I cannot give any technical advice because I am not an experienced writer.
Nevertheless, I know what children and adults who kept their inner child alive like.
I feel honored to provide the illustration for this poem!

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
    Thank you so much! I'm really glad you got the chance to see how perfectly your artwork matched my poem. I thought about using a photo of the "real" Button, but when I saw this picture, I knew it would be perfect. And the title really sealed it. lol Thank you so much for the six stars, also! It is much appreciated. :-)
Comment from miajaffri
Excellent
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Thank you for posting your upbeat children's poem. I enjoyed reading
it and hearing the rhyming words. It's hard to believe Easter is here
already.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
    Thank you so much for your review!