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Living in the Son Shine

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Comment from eliz100
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I enjoyed reading your poem. The flow is wonderful with your rhyming scheme and the reuse of words. I really enjoyed the topic you choose. Good luck in the contet.

 Comment Written 03-May-2021


reply by the author on 03-May-2021
    Hi! Thank you for your wonderful review!
    Susan
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
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I love this beautiful uplifting poem of walking in "Sonshine" You have done a wonderful job! Nicely worded with a great flow! Neat illustration as well!

 Comment Written 03-May-2021


reply by the author on 03-May-2021
    HI Kerry,
    Thanks so much for you wonderful review!
    Blessings,
    Susan
Comment from Wendy G
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I like that your book is devoted to honouring God, and looking forward to being in His presence. Very best wishes for all your writing and for the contest.

 Comment Written 03-May-2021


reply by the author on 03-May-2021
    Hi Wendy! Thank you for you kind comments!
    Susan
Comment from ~Dovey
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Hi Susan,

This is a beautiful and uplifting piece. The play on words from son shine to a sunshine comparison is clever.

Good luck in the contest.

Kim

 Comment Written 02-May-2021


reply by the author on 03-May-2021
    Hi Kim! Thank you for your kind wishes and the great review!
    Blessings,
    Susan
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Don't Look for Me in Shadows, has a catchy repeating sense from each final and subsequent stanza line. The upbeat theme allows the reader to feel the joyful spirit within. Nice.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2021

Comment from flylikeaneagle
Exceptional
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Susan: beautiful art work and thoughts about being with God.
We can dance in the son shine forever. Great witness to the world.
You have quite a challenge to write a poem a day with NaPo.
I've written 6 NaNoWriMo and now writting three novels from these.
Editing takes so much time. God's blessings. flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
    Hi!
    Thank you for your exception six star review and thoughtful comments! I am honored!
    Good luck to you, also, in your writing goal. If my work schedule doesn't get too bad (and with God's inspiration!), I should be able to make it through April with thirty poems. Hopefully some of them will be reasonably good.
    Take care and blessings to you!
    Susan
Comment from pome lover
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Susan, that is lovely and I love "Living in the Son Shine.
A beautiful way to describe it, and original.
Will have to read some more of yours!
Congratulations on being recognized. Wonderful.
Katharine - pome lover

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
    Hi Katharine! Thank you for your great review! I appreciate your feedback and congratulations. I hope you enjoy some of the other poems that I'm including in that book - it's for the NaPoWriMo challenged.
    Thanks again!
    Susan
reply by pome lover on 08-Apr-2021
    yes, will check out some more. didn't know you were doing it too 'til I read this. It' really something promoting every day, plus creating, isn't it?
Comment from Boogienights
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This is beautiful, and though I'm not in any hurry to leave this world, you have described something so lovely that it takes away the fear of dying. This contest entry will do well, I can tell. Best of luck. :)

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
    Hi!
    Thank you so much for your great review and wonderful comments.
    Blessings!
    Susan
Comment from MAMONIA
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Well said in this lovely poem. Your beliefs become real with your words. I really enjoyed reading this and look forward to continuing to the next one you have written.
Praise God; this is beauty. You are wonderfully gifted.
Marie

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
    Hi Marie! I think I was just reviewing one of your poems at the same time you were reviewing mine! What an interesting coincidence. :-)
    Thank you for your kind comments and encouragement!
    Susan
reply by MAMONIA on 08-Apr-2021
    I think you are right.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I loved the form here, the rhymes and the flow, a fine poem from a talented writer and I wish I had a six for you as this deserves one, I saw the shadows in this poem with the last line and first repeating, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
    Hi Dolly,
    Thank you for your lovely review! I truly appreciate it.
    Susan
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 08-Apr-2021
    You are a very talented poet Susan x x x