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THE CURSE

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The six book of the Novels of the Breedline

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Comment from Mistydawn
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What a gripping chapter from start to finish. I was on the edge of my seat the entire time. I do hope Jenna manages to escapes, helps the others get free. It's well-written from start to finish, like always, I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
    Awww... thanks so much, Mistydawn :)

    This was one of my favorite chapters to create. Jena's dream of getting attacked was actually one of my own crazy dreams. LOL! It was fun to add in my story. Glad you enjoyed!

    Thanks again!
    Big hugs & happy Easter my friend,
    Shana :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This Part, Chapter, the supernatural fiction, in the Novel: The Curse, speaks in continuation with new dream addition thru a good taletelling and plot development fostered thru dialogues fantastic, ends with curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
    Thanks so much, Alcreator :)

    The dream Jena had was actually a dream of mine. I have been a runner for years and I normally get up and run at 4 am. I also run by an old cemetery. One night, I dreamed that dream. I woke up thinking it was strange to dream as such, but also thought it would be a great story to add in my novel. Glad you enjoyed!

    Thanks again!
    Sincerely,
    Shana :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Prisoner in her own mind or for real? Will she escape or this will be like a Perpetuum mobile dream? Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
    Thanks so much, Iza :)

    The dream Jena was having was actually a dream of mine a few months ago. I'm a runner and I have a routine every morning. I get up around 3:30 and go for a 3 mile run. I do pass by an old cemetery. One night, I dreamed the same dream I wrote for Jena and decided to make it part of my story. I occasionally have odd dreams about my novels. Once I dreamed a whole wedding for two of my characters. It was like I was actually there. So I wrote about it the next day. I guess you could say I have a wild imagination. Although, they do make good stories. LOL!

    Thanks again for taking the time to read my chapter and for the awesome review.
    Sincerely,
    Shana :)
Comment from royowen
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Do you actually dream of these things Shana? So you are completely wrapped up in these wonderful stories of yours, I think you have been definitely called to write these things. Jena and her creature are forever living, and the kindly old woman Fiona have set her free, must have iced herself in this organisation, and Dr Michaels is surely a evil man, albeit an intellectual, why did he think she wouldn't pull the trigger? Well done Shana, great effort, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
    Yes, I really dreamed this. I'm a runner and I have a routine where I get out at 4 am every day and go for about 2-3 miles. On my path, there is an old cemetery. One night, I had this crazy dream, so I thought it would be great to add this to Jena's story. Once I dreamed an entire wedding for two of my main characters. LOL! This is actually how my story began. It was a dream I had seven years ago.
    Glad you enjoyed. Stay tuned... more adventures to come. Thanks for all your support.

    Always your fan,
    Shana :)
reply by royowen on 31-Mar-2021
    Wow! That is truly amazing Shana, it helps to dream. Well done
Comment from fm wright
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Your dream does certainly fit in perfectly with this chapter. I am on edge as to find out who the others are and how the breedline's secret was made known to Dr. Michaels. It is building to what I perceive as an exciting climax. I continue to look forward to each chapter. The pictures certainly sum up this chapter well.






 Comment Written 30-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
    Thanks so much, Faye :)

    I actually had this same dream I wrote for Jena. I'm a runner and I have a routine where I get out every morning around 4 am and go for 2-3 miles. On my running path, I pass by an old cemetery. I know... it sounds creepy, but I love that kind of stuff especially when it's foggy and there is a full moon. My boyfriend always tells me I'm a crazy person. LOL! Maybe he's right. I probably should be careful about running alone at that hour. He's always warning me that someone is going to get me. I guess that's why I dreamed this crazy dream about getting attacked.
    Anyway, this is how my story began seven years ago. It was from a dream. I dreamed of people who could shapeshift into wolves and so that is how the story came to be.
    Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for all your support. I don't get many reviews, but I do treasure yours.

    Big hugs,
    Shana :)
reply by fm wright on 31-Mar-2021
    All from a dream. Keep on dreamong my friend, and stay safe.
    Hugs,
    Faye