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Chochee Medina Life and Times

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Comment from Earl Corp
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I like how you differentiate between being spiritual and being religious. Your notes were very helpful in this aspect. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your Support and Review. Religion is fine, I'm a believer, just seen and heard many preaching non religious agenda's.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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I like the first sentence: "Religion was meant to teach us Moral lessons relayed by our Creator!" Unfortunately politicians use it as political weapon and building power for their own benefits.

Thanks for sharing this now with us... Let's remind the world what you said: "Religion was meant to teach us Moral lessons relayed by our Creator!."

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your Support and Review. Yes, Politians and Religious Leaders in some cases. Blessings.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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I like this spiritual poem. meets the contest criteria. Trust in God, follow your intuition, He will always lead you to the right destination. Enjoyed much. Good luck!

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your Support and Review. Religion is fine if not leading the flock astray with an agenda.
Comment from KyColonel Randal
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Thank you for sharing this poem. I see this is an entry for the ABC poem contest. The first letters of the first four lines are sequential as is expected with this form. That is a copious amount of author notes included. Best of luck with your contest entry!

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
    I'm Thankful for your Support and Review, Sorry about the extensive amount of Diffinition notes.
reply by KyColonel Randal on 22-Mar-2021
    No worries! I like notes!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This spiritual ABC poem, A Message Relayed, seems to carry a message, but it isn't very clear to me. I find the difference between being spiritual and religious is community. You or I can have a personal relationship with God, but being part of a larger group, agreeing and disagreeing in a positive manner about mission and doctrine, builds a force for good in the world.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
    Thank you Sir for your Support and Review. I agree. It's the Mission's that get away from the intent of Christ's Ministry that that concern me.