big old bear.
a poem3 total reviews
Comment from Judy Lawless
In this poem you've done an excellent job of describing your life and philosophy in few words. A vagabond aware of the things and people he leaves behind. Good job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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In this poem you've done an excellent job of describing your life and philosophy in few words. A vagabond aware of the things and people he leaves behind. Good job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thanks for the insightful review Judy. I crave movement and new surroundings. The spring weather is reassuring me, cheers, j
Comment from Wendy G
This is a very clever and witty poem, describing the various stages of a life. It has been well thought through and constructed, using the power of suggestion rather than telling. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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This is a very clever and witty poem, describing the various stages of a life. It has been well thought through and constructed, using the power of suggestion rather than telling. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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Thanks for the insightful review. It has been a long year and I am getting restless. I hope everything gets better soon.
I cooked for a few groups of young Australians in Zanzibar and we had such fun. So polite and clever.
Someone asked for rope one day and this girl had some in her back pocket, haha like Canadians.
Do you have one of those herding dogs? my favorite.
cheers, j
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No my dog isn't a herding dog. he is too small. He has the same colouring as a border collie (generally black and white) but I think is Papillon crossed with Daschund. Short legs (but very fast) and very cute face with the "butterfly" ears. Great companion, great personality.
Comment from AJ McCall
Wow. Very interesting lines for a poem! I love the flow of the rhyming. I was caught by the picture first. I absolutely love it, reminds me of those wallpapers for your pc or phone. Very nicely done! Will be voting for this!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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Wow. Very interesting lines for a poem! I love the flow of the rhyming. I was caught by the picture first. I absolutely love it, reminds me of those wallpapers for your pc or phone. Very nicely done! Will be voting for this!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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Thanks for the encouraging review, I appreciate your thoughts. Yeah, this is how I am feeling lately, but I do have faith for brighter days ahead. The artist is one of my favorites Raoul D'Hermental, he has a few great ones I use often.
Have a great weekend, thanks for the sparkly stars to light my way, haha, cheers, j
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You're welcome! Me too! You have a lovely weekend as well!! :)
