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Viewing comments for Chapter 82 "My Blood Moon Myth"Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
My Blood Moon Myth
by QC Poet
Hello, QC,
Cool poem about the Mexican blood moon myth. I never heard of it. It made me think of native American myths and stories. Good entry for the picture this club challenge.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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My Blood Moon Myth
by QC Poet
Hello, QC,
Cool poem about the Mexican blood moon myth. I never heard of it. It made me think of native American myths and stories. Good entry for the picture this club challenge.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Mostly invented and some rabbit on the moon myth mixed in as besides a little mention in spanish conquest documents of legends. Always Greatful for your Reviews and great writing examples. Bless you.
Comment from royowen
They have been occurring in the heavens for a long time now, the last few have occurred on the the Jewish feasts, at Passover in March/April, and September, (Rose Hashanah) they are significant as they appear to be the "signs in the Heavens of Christ's imminent return" as predicted in the Bible. Beautifully written my friend, an excellent post, but of course the rabbit theory is good too. Well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Would be to(o) bawdy.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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They have been occurring in the heavens for a long time now, the last few have occurred on the the Jewish feasts, at Passover in March/April, and September, (Rose Hashanah) they are significant as they appear to be the "signs in the Heavens of Christ's imminent return" as predicted in the Bible. Beautifully written my friend, an excellent post, but of course the rabbit theory is good too. Well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Would be to(o) bawdy.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Support, Encouragement, and Review. I'll be sure to make the spelling correction. God Blessings to you.
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Well done
Comment from Leann DS
Yes, I did enjoy your poem and I did, indeed, get a chuckle.
It may be the way my screen reader is reading the poem to me, but I am having an issue with the format. I am blind, and my screen reader is reading a big, long sentence with a rhyming word at the end. If this is, indeed, the way it is written, I would suggest breaking each sentence into two lines for poetic structure. If it's already written that way, please disregard. :-) Thank you for sharing. Hugs and blessings to you.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Yes, I did enjoy your poem and I did, indeed, get a chuckle.
It may be the way my screen reader is reading the poem to me, but I am having an issue with the format. I am blind, and my screen reader is reading a big, long sentence with a rhyming word at the end. If this is, indeed, the way it is written, I would suggest breaking each sentence into two lines for poetic structure. If it's already written that way, please disregard. :-) Thank you for sharing. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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I'm Sorry about that, the poem is written in four line paragraphs, so about in 4 paragraphs which is about the normal length and structure I've been using.
Thank you for your Support and Review.
Bless you.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I really enjoyed reading your legend of the Blood Moon. Everything made perfect sense. I love reading and writing about the 'things' in the night sky--they are so beautiful and awe-inspiring. I like the idea of the rabbits hoping from star to star pushing the sun and the moon. Your words/lines flow smoothly with great imagery. Thanks for haring. No worries about the length of time a prompt has been posted.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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I really enjoyed reading your legend of the Blood Moon. Everything made perfect sense. I love reading and writing about the 'things' in the night sky--they are so beautiful and awe-inspiring. I like the idea of the rabbits hoping from star to star pushing the sun and the moon. Your words/lines flow smoothly with great imagery. Thanks for haring. No worries about the length of time a prompt has been posted.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Support, Encouragement, and Review.
Partially derived from Aztec /Mexica Moon Rabbit Legend,
Copy and paste; mexicolore Link to web browser.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A philosophical write and we are constantly searching for meanings and understanding, living our lives the best we can when faced with adversity, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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A philosophical write and we are constantly searching for meanings and understanding, living our lives the best we can when faced with adversity, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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I made some Very Helpful adjustments and Thank All Helping in my process improvement and Making me Better for it. Blessings.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This poem gives a new slant on signs in the heavens with a modern take on a blood moon and rabbit legend and placement in the skies. I enjoyed reading it. I kind of think it straddling a rhymed poem and a prose poem, based on the meter. Just wanted to point out that you want to change it's to plain, ordinary its (no apostrophe) to show possession in front of its fields in line four and also change absorbed it's Blood to just: absorbed its blood in line 9.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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This poem gives a new slant on signs in the heavens with a modern take on a blood moon and rabbit legend and placement in the skies. I enjoyed reading it. I kind of think it straddling a rhymed poem and a prose poem, based on the meter. Just wanted to point out that you want to change it's to plain, ordinary its (no apostrophe) to show possession in front of its fields in line four and also change absorbed it's Blood to just: absorbed its blood in line 9.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Support and Review, I'll make the corrections shortly Thanks again.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
An interesting read. The smartly written poem that rhymes well, tells the story of rabbits and blood moon, but also about rebirth and growth according to the phases of the moon. Interesting mix of earthy and supernatural. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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An interesting read. The smartly written poem that rhymes well, tells the story of rabbits and blood moon, but also about rebirth and growth according to the phases of the moon. Interesting mix of earthy and supernatural. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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My Thanks and Graditude for your Support and Review.
Comment from George 1
This is an ambitious effort to present such a story in a rhyming format. I appreciate the eclectic mixture of language ranging from the sacred to the earthly. At times I felt the thread of the narrative was hard to follow but that's not surprising on this kind of subject matter. The extra content helps. Thanks for the interesting read.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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This is an ambitious effort to present such a story in a rhyming format. I appreciate the eclectic mixture of language ranging from the sacred to the earthly. At times I felt the thread of the narrative was hard to follow but that's not surprising on this kind of subject matter. The extra content helps. Thanks for the interesting read.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Thanks you for your Support and Feedback, struggled to keep such a tough topic to few words. Blessings to you.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
A poem about rabbits and blood moon, but also about rebirth and growth according to the phases of the moon. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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A poem about rabbits and blood moon, but also about rebirth and growth according to the phases of the moon. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Thanks you for the Review, Support and Encouragement.
Comment from DonandVicki
I enjoyed reading your author's note almost as much as readfing your well composed poetry. The poetry was composed very much like a poetical prose. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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I enjoyed reading your author's note almost as much as readfing your well composed poetry. The poetry was composed very much like a poetical prose. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Thank you and Bless you for your Time to Read, Rate, and Review this poem offering.
