long goodbye
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Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
I understand! I lost my baby seventy-two hours after his birth. So much the same as a stillborn baby. We never know what they might have become. But, remember, if you believe, you will be with him someday.
Ralf
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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I understand! I lost my baby seventy-two hours after his birth. So much the same as a stillborn baby. We never know what they might have become. But, remember, if you believe, you will be with him someday.
Ralf
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful and heartfelt comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
A stillborn birth is a sorrowful occasion and one that is to be treated with respect. Yes, the parents mourn, as those nine months in preparation were involved in deep love.
A most unique and well written entry into this contest, and I wish you great luck with the Committee.
Gloria
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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A stillborn birth is a sorrowful occasion and one that is to be treated with respect. Yes, the parents mourn, as those nine months in preparation were involved in deep love.
A most unique and well written entry into this contest, and I wish you great luck with the Committee.
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much, I tried to show respect along with feelings, hope I did not offend, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of your fifteen syllables to describe a heartbreaking situation--to carry the baby full-term, the lose him/her.
Shattering
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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You have made effective use of your fifteen syllables to describe a heartbreaking situation--to carry the baby full-term, the lose him/her.
Shattering
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
That has got to be such a devastating experience for parents of a stillborn child. To wait 9 months for a seed to grow and never actually seeing it bloom. A touching piece in 15 syllables.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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That has got to be such a devastating experience for parents of a stillborn child. To wait 9 months for a seed to grow and never actually seeing it bloom. A touching piece in 15 syllables.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much, yes this sort of pain will always be, your comments are much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are very sad words and I can't imagine what parents go through in these circumstances having waited hopefully for this baby to arrive, all melancholy write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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These are very sad words and I can't imagine what parents go through in these circumstances having waited hopefully for this baby to arrive, all melancholy write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much, yes the grief the feel must be very hard to deal with, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello Kym
Loosing a child is very hard. Thank God I never did.
--Your poem flows well
--good syllable count and connection between lines
--the structure makes sense
--it draws on my emotions
--it presents strong images
--it would recommend it
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Hello Kym
Loosing a child is very hard. Thank God I never did.
--Your poem flows well
--good syllable count and connection between lines
--the structure makes sense
--it draws on my emotions
--it presents strong images
--it would recommend it
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and the encouragement you give****kahpot
Comment from AnnaLinda
kahpot,
I hope this 15 syllable poem was not inspired by a personal experience.
Well, there you go again...rhyme and near rhyme included as well as an
impacting message.
Great presentation as well. I had to take a second look at the artwork.
Nicely done,
Anna
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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kahpot,
I hope this 15 syllable poem was not inspired by a personal experience.
Well, there you go again...rhyme and near rhyme included as well as an
impacting message.
Great presentation as well. I had to take a second look at the artwork.
Nicely done,
Anna
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you Anna, no not personal but someone close, thank you for your wonderful comments, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear kahpot, This poem is a beautiful tribute to your stillborn child. The picture you found is absolutely beautiful because she sits between the two of you, as an angel.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Dear kahpot, This poem is a beautiful tribute to your stillborn child. The picture you found is absolutely beautiful because she sits between the two of you, as an angel.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, though not me but someone very close, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mastery
Helo my friend. Although this is truly a very emotionally charged poem, Im do hope it is not written from your own personal experience? If so, I am sorry for your hurt and prayers are with you. bless you. Bob.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Helo my friend. Although this is truly a very emotionally charged poem, Im do hope it is not written from your own personal experience? If so, I am sorry for your hurt and prayers are with you. bless you. Bob.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you Bob, no not me directly, though I do feel for the ones, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Bless you, my Friend. Bob
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Well done. This captures exceedingly well the absolute sadness and loss experienced by parents of the potential not realized--a still-born child. My mother had several pregnancies that did not come to fruition and I can only sadly imagine how she must've felt. Thank you for sharing these devastatingly real to so many sad experiences.
Jesse
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Well done. This captures exceedingly well the absolute sadness and loss experienced by parents of the potential not realized--a still-born child. My mother had several pregnancies that did not come to fruition and I can only sadly imagine how she must've felt. Thank you for sharing these devastatingly real to so many sad experiences.
Jesse
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you Jesse, yes it would be devastating for those parents, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Yes, it would be...
I am glad you liked my review. Obviously, I assume the author has experienced these in one way or another. It works better for me if I do. If I assume everything written is fiction, it deprives me of the best experience possible.
Jesse
