As I Stumble...
A Quatern poem17 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A beautiful message in your Quatern for the Potlatch club and your repeated line fits easily into each verse. Everyone's path is different, and we have to find our own way, with His help, nice work.
cheers
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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A beautiful message in your Quatern for the Potlatch club and your repeated line fits easily into each verse. Everyone's path is different, and we have to find our own way, with His help, nice work.
cheers
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello kahpot, your poem is beautifully written. I especially liked:
as I stumble God breaks my fall
(Good imagery, and great repeating line)
Silky rhyming, great artwork choice. A poem of faith. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Hello kahpot, your poem is beautifully written. I especially liked:
as I stumble God breaks my fall
(Good imagery, and great repeating line)
Silky rhyming, great artwork choice. A poem of faith. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you, yes I think He has picked me up many times, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Kahpot,
This is an awesome poem that pertains to anyone who had a relationship with God. For those who don't have God in their lives yet, it is inspiring and could help bring him/her to the valors.
I stumble often, but God always breaks my fall.
Exceptional work.
Good luck in the contest,
Cindy
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Kahpot,
This is an awesome poem that pertains to anyone who had a relationship with God. For those who don't have God in their lives yet, it is inspiring and could help bring him/her to the valors.
I stumble often, but God always breaks my fall.
Exceptional work.
Good luck in the contest,
Cindy
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Wow! thank you very much-have not heard from you in a while, your comments and review are wonderful along with the sixer all very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from AnnaLinda
Kahpot,
Your talent as a poet, as well as your spirituality, really comes through
so strongly here in this well crafted Quatern. I loved every stanza -
the message within each one as well. Your repeating line is so
humble and your rhymes unforced.
Truly an exceptional poem here and beautiful presentation as well.
Anna
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Kahpot,
Your talent as a poet, as well as your spirituality, really comes through
so strongly here in this well crafted Quatern. I loved every stanza -
the message within each one as well. Your repeating line is so
humble and your rhymes unforced.
Truly an exceptional poem here and beautiful presentation as well.
Anna
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Wow! thank you very much, I enjoyed the challenge of this form and will attempt more only written one before this, very much appreciated*****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
As I Stumble...
by kahpot
Hello, Kym,
Lovely entry for the Potlatch Club challenge. It's the second I read....both spiritual. I like the rhythm of the poem. It's good to know that God is there to catch us.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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As I Stumble...
by kahpot
Hello, Kym,
Lovely entry for the Potlatch Club challenge. It's the second I read....both spiritual. I like the rhythm of the poem. It's good to know that God is there to catch us.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much, I enjoyed the challenge of this form, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from damommy
I especially like this line: "He saves the dark from greeting me
and shows His light for me to see." Not only the absence of light, but the despair in our hearts. Good job.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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I especially like this line: "He saves the dark from greeting me
and shows His light for me to see." Not only the absence of light, but the despair in our hearts. Good job.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Thank you, I am glad you like that line as I was a dubious about it, your comments are very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem . It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. This is Very well done. Awesome photo selection As well to go with your poem.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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This is a beautifully written poem . It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. This is Very well done. Awesome photo selection As well to go with your poem.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, much appreciated****kahpot
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Your welcome
Comment from Mastery
Hi my friend. I like this quatern. It has good form and originality from start to finish, but my favorite set of lines is here:
"still so eager to over reach
I pass the heights I tried to breach
as I stumble God breaks my fall
and gently whispers-heed my call"
Bravo! Bob
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Hi my friend. I like this quatern. It has good form and originality from start to finish, but my favorite set of lines is here:
"still so eager to over reach
I pass the heights I tried to breach
as I stumble God breaks my fall
and gently whispers-heed my call"
Bravo! Bob
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Thank you Bob, things are starting to find normality and my mind can concentrate on more reading and writing, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I really like the quatern form of poetry. Yours is very well-done, with an effective repeat line, inspirational, and expressive of faith in God as the one with the power to consistently break our falls.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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I really like the quatern form of poetry. Yours is very well-done, with an effective repeat line, inspirational, and expressive of faith in God as the one with the power to consistently break our falls.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much, yes we do need help throughout our journey, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love your faithful message and wonderful rhymes and metre, your poem is a joy to read and has uplifted my day, it is just what I needed to read this morning, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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I love your faithful message and wonderful rhymes and metre, your poem is a joy to read and has uplifted my day, it is just what I needed to read this morning, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Thank you, I am glad these words lifted your day, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
