Ballet Girl
Minute Poetry27 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
Nice picture, Melissa. :) Is she your niece? Sometimes a picture is worth more than a thousand words this is one of those pictures. :) Your poem gives it life with loving words of praise. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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Nice picture, Melissa. :) Is she your niece? Sometimes a picture is worth more than a thousand words this is one of those pictures. :) Your poem gives it life with loving words of praise. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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This verse was fun to write and those little chubby legs and toes just made penning this all the more fun. So glad you liked it and, no, she is not my niece.
Melissa
Comment from Anne Johnston
Very well done on the rhyming and syllable count on this poem. Like the descriptive words you have used, like "on chubby toes," and "a dancing whirl, this ballet girl."
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Very well done on the rhyming and syllable count on this poem. Like the descriptive words you have used, like "on chubby toes," and "a dancing whirl, this ballet girl."
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Hello Anne. Thanks so much. I enjoyed writing this Minute about her little twinkle toes. Ha!!
Melissa
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You are welcome
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Nice work on your Minute poem, Melissa.
Your meter and rhyme are perfect and
the picture just precious. Well done.
Nancy:)
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Nice work on your Minute poem, Melissa.
Your meter and rhyme are perfect and
the picture just precious. Well done.
Nancy:)
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much Nancy... I just loved her little ballet twinkle toes :)
Melissa
Comment from lancellot
Are you trying to melt my frozen heart? Now, I got something in my eye. This is so sweet and well made. And where on Earth did you find a picture of those chubby baby legs and itty-bitty toes.
Great form and theme.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Are you trying to melt my frozen heart? Now, I got something in my eye. This is so sweet and well made. And where on Earth did you find a picture of those chubby baby legs and itty-bitty toes.
Great form and theme.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you... haha, yes, those little ballet legs and toes melted my heart too. So glad you like it, and the pic came from the web. :). I looked for a source, but found none.
Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
This is just so precious! The theme and minute form is perfectly divine! Aching for a six here! A delight in pink fluff. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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This is just so precious! The theme and minute form is perfectly divine! Aching for a six here! A delight in pink fluff. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Hi Sally. Thanks so much. I am delighted you liked the little ballerina with those twinkle toes!!
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Babies in particular tend to stand on their toes rather than the flat of their foot and this is a sweet and tender minute about this little girl practicing her ballet moves, well rhymed, perfect meter with well chosen words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Babies in particular tend to stand on their toes rather than the flat of their foot and this is a sweet and tender minute about this little girl practicing her ballet moves, well rhymed, perfect meter with well chosen words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you Dolly. I had fun with this Minute form and just loved her adorable toes. :)
Melissa
Comment from Pantygynt
They all want to to be ballet dancers at that age, but most grow too tall, or too heavy or graduate to rock 'n roll and a 'real' job (are there any left, do you think?)
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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They all want to to be ballet dancers at that age, but most grow too tall, or too heavy or graduate to rock 'n roll and a 'real' job (are there any left, do you think?)
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Hi Jim. Thanks for your clever comments. I hope there are many who will pursue ballet because I love to watch them and admire their grace. Hope you are doing well over there!
Melissa
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I really enjoy reading this Minute poem about the cute ballet girl. The rhyming scheme works so did the iambic meter. The syllable count is correct, too.
I'm glad you put French in it, too.
Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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I really enjoy reading this Minute poem about the cute ballet girl. The rhyming scheme works so did the iambic meter. The syllable count is correct, too.
I'm glad you put French in it, too.
Well done.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Hello Lisa. Thank you for your wonderful comments about that little ballet cutie. So glad you liked it!
Melissa
Comment from Wendy G
I love the fact that the love of movement fills her soul with thrills untold - this paves the way for enjoying a healthy lifestyle, regardless of whether she continues with ballet. More important is the self-esteem, as she feels beautiful. A beautiful poem, thoughtful and sensitive, and well written.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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I love the fact that the love of movement fills her soul with thrills untold - this paves the way for enjoying a healthy lifestyle, regardless of whether she continues with ballet. More important is the self-esteem, as she feels beautiful. A beautiful poem, thoughtful and sensitive, and well written.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Hey Wendy. Thank you!! So glad you liked it!
Melissa
Comment from Irish Rain
Oh my!
What a precious picture!
What a darling set of teensy
chubby toes!
I love this poem of the
ballet baby, it's just so
very sweet!
The minute form is perfect for this.
Blessings...
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Oh my!
What a precious picture!
What a darling set of teensy
chubby toes!
I love this poem of the
ballet baby, it's just so
very sweet!
The minute form is perfect for this.
Blessings...
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Thank you Judy. I enjoyed writing this one and think her twinkling toes are just too cute. I really appreciate this lovely review. :)
Melissa
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You're welcome!!
