Comment from QC Poet

Excellent

Sounds like a fun day at the beach listening to the waves crashing easily on the shore. Descriptive, refreshing and relaxing. Thank you for Sharing this Haiku poem offering.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021

Thank you for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This haiku, Senses by the Sea, presented with a 3-6-4 formatting, creatws the solemn scene of the ever-reaching tide lapping at the land and bringing the ocean's force to the pebbles.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021

Thank you for your feedback, Bill. Best wishes, Debra

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Senses by the Sea
by Debra White

Hello, Debra,

I love your haiku. Excellent entry for the haiku club challenge. Good use of your senses.....

saline tide (taste)
skittishly ebbs and flows (touch) -
pebbles clatter(sound)

Good job!

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021

Thank you, Gypsy, for your kind and encouraging feedback. I appreciate it.
Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I loved this one as I adore the sea. It is full of sensory pleasures and a wonderful place of healing for me. The sea has good memories there too. Sending my best today and blessings always for your writing challenge, Sally XOs...

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021

Thank you, Sal, for your lovely feedback :)
Best wishes always, Debra x

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image and
presentation, Debra.
-You wrote a very good
haiku with effective nature
and seasonal imagery
describing the tide.
-A very good satori line, too.
-Well done.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021

Thank you so much, Pam for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it!
Best wishes, Debra :)

reply by Pam (respa) on 23-Feb-2021

You are very welcome, Debra.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You brought an English shoreline to life here with your few words Debra, many beaches in the UK have shingle and the noise awakened by senses here of home, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021

Thank you so much, Dolly, for your lovely feedback. I'm happy you enjoyed this one.
Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Julie Sandy

Excellent

Lovely picture and great words to go with it for an effective haiku.
I can hear the sounds of the water and the pebbles in your writing.

Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Julie :)
Best wishes, Debra

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Excellent exploration of the senses. skittishly is a fine word that describes the clatter on the shoreline. Also the sense of smell with saline.

Very nicely written. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021

Hello Gloria,
Thank you for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a beautifully written poem. I absolute love your photo. The colours of the ocean waves Are so beautiful. The breaking of the foam it's just amazing. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021

Thank you so much, Joanne, for your warm and generous feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)

reply by Joanne Gill-Maddick on 23-Feb-2021

Your welcome

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

A fine haiku from title to tail--you are wise to avail yourself of the free line of the title to enhance the imagery and alliteration--startling choice of words give this a kick!

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021

Thanks, Liz
I appreciate your feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra