One Stormy Night
Strange things happened...15 total reviews
Comment from cupa tea
That's a nice little poem about the ghost child. I think it'd make a really good story if you decided to write one up. All you'd have to do is follow the story from your poem. You have all the information you'd need. Good luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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That's a nice little poem about the ghost child. I think it'd make a really good story if you decided to write one up. All you'd have to do is follow the story from your poem. You have all the information you'd need. Good luck in the contest...
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this nice review and suggestion. I really like ghost stories, so maybe I should. Thanks again for reading.
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I love ghost stories...if you write it send me a message so I can read it...
Comment from Wanda Stebbins
Nicely done using the prompts. Would love to read more from you. Good luck in the contest.
Love the way you wrote about the young spirit wanting to rest
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Nicely done using the prompts. Would love to read more from you. Good luck in the contest.
Love the way you wrote about the young spirit wanting to rest
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review. :)
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Very well done, a great poem for the Use These Words contest. Very imaginative. Great rhyme and a good story with a happy ending, often usual for a ghost story. =] Wishing you success in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Very well done, a great poem for the Use These Words contest. Very imaginative. Great rhyme and a good story with a happy ending, often usual for a ghost story. =] Wishing you success in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Thank you for taking time to read and review my poem. :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
A child trapped in a house that finally is released to move over: "
"Hurry along, your family waits",
and then the young ghost with no fear,
walked slowly to that house of stone,
I watched, and saw her disappear." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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A child trapped in a house that finally is released to move over: "
"Hurry along, your family waits",
and then the young ghost with no fear,
walked slowly to that house of stone,
I watched, and saw her disappear." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this great review. :)
Comment from Wendy G
How very creative, and original, giving your poem a freshness and appeal. It flows smoothly, and the necessary words have been incorporated seamlessly. Good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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How very creative, and original, giving your poem a freshness and appeal. It flows smoothly, and the necessary words have been incorporated seamlessly. Good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you, I appreciate this very nice review. :)
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
This poem is an excellent entry for the Use These Words contest! Very creative and I truly enjoyed the ghost story. Best of luck to you in the contest and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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This poem is an excellent entry for the Use These Words contest! Very creative and I truly enjoyed the ghost story. Best of luck to you in the contest and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you, I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an eerie tale and gave me a chill down my spine, you managed to use all the words required for the contest.
Many of your lines are out of metre and I have a suggestion below for one of them:
furious winds made birds take flight.
you might consider:
"with winds of fury, birds take flight."
Despite the flow, I still enjoyed your story.
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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This is an eerie tale and gave me a chill down my spine, you managed to use all the words required for the contest.
Many of your lines are out of metre and I have a suggestion below for one of them:
furious winds made birds take flight.
you might consider:
"with winds of fury, birds take flight."
Despite the flow, I still enjoyed your story.
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. :)
Comment from l.raven
she was just waiting for someone to help her go to her family...and now she is with them...she is now home...
I love your story told...and love your poem...
so very well written...the perfect picture...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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she was just waiting for someone to help her go to her family...and now she is with them...she is now home...
I love your story told...and love your poem...
so very well written...the perfect picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it. I thought it might have been a bit long ..but I couldn't help myself..lol. Thanks again for reading. :)
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they are never to long when they hold a readers attention...and this poem does...
a great story told...and you are so welcome...smiling back at you...love xxoo
Comment from BethShelby
This is a nice ghost story built into the poem that uses all the required words. Your poem rhyme well and tells and eerie story of a person who goes out of the way to lead a ghost home.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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This is a nice ghost story built into the poem that uses all the required words. Your poem rhyme well and tells and eerie story of a person who goes out of the way to lead a ghost home.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this very nice review, it's really appreciated. :)
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Your thirteen quatrains regarding a little girl's spirit looking to be reunited with her family is very poignant and extremely well done. I enjoyed it from start to finish and was pleased to see that it ended well for the child. Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Your thirteen quatrains regarding a little girl's spirit looking to be reunited with her family is very poignant and extremely well done. I enjoyed it from start to finish and was pleased to see that it ended well for the child. Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you, that's very very kind of you to say. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
